Harry is Emancipated and at the time was told it meant he was free to do magic.

This is a good story with a great ending, I really enjoyed reading it so thank you for writing it! Hermione and Harry are really cute together and I enjoyed reading about them!

I have to say, I am a bit disappointed with the rushed ending. Also, in argument to your an... 13 is definitely too young for sex and marriage, you would have been better pushing that until they were older, as most younglings don't fully understand or grasp the concepts of being intimate. You didn't even let them date! I get falling in "love" and having crushes, but you totally Mary sued them by making them overpowering from the start. Your story started out with an interesting premise, which is what caught me, but you went way out there with sex on his 13th bday, you basically had Hermione beg him for it, after having her spend months saying she wouldn't! Also, I don't know if any parent who would take their almost 14 year old daughter saying that she talked a boy into taking her virginity and now they were magically married. And I don't believe there is a parent out there who would just shrug off their child sleeping naked with another! What kind of drugs were you on when you wrote this?

Just a thought but wouldn't Petunia and Dudley, be considered descendants of Rowena Ravenclaw? Would the Head of House then be able to instate them as family?

Wow, Hermione isn't just bossy in this, she's bitchy. Really dislike her personality here. Oh well, too late.

I’m kinda disappointed that he went into grrifindore

Yesssss I like snake

Bit longer them your other stories, but still a good one. Would have liked to see what happened to Dudley after school as well.

I made it to chapter 42 which is surprising. I like the Petunia redemption arc and the clever way the bad guys were dealt with (and I’m always up for a good soul bonding) but all the little kid sex was a deal breaker. Not just the sexual activity at 13, but the way this Hermione did not listen and respect to this Harry’s feelings and wishes about naked sleeping and sexual contact chapter over chapter before that was a misstep. Basically, this ‘Harry was sexually harassed by his supposed soulmate over and over again and pressured into underage sex he wasn’t ready for. Talk about unpleasant…

I like the idea of this story and I am thankful that you took the time to write it and share it with us. On a personal level though, I found myself very uncomfortable with children that young being so open about personal matters and sex. It just felt too unrealistic and forced is perhaps the best words for it. I originally wrote a lot more, but then I realised that if I had been talking to a person in front of me, I wouldn’t have been talking but being forceful and on the edge of shouting. I’ll just leave it at I personally don’t agree with a 12 and 13 year old having sex for a number of reasons. The reason I deleted my comments was because other then that, which was unfortunately throughout the story, I really did enjoy the rest of the ideas in the story.

I like it and I think you did very good thank you

Great story

children or even people in general don't talk like that... not only is it stilted like they've are trying too hard to sound older or smarter but children don't generally talk about their barely teenage boyfriend inadvertently slipping in or finishing between her thighs with their parents like it's normal dinner conversation.

It's like if i were to write a story about how a person raped a child and then said sorry and everybody was like 'okay they said sorry' so it's ok now and they are a good person again and everybody forgives them and likes them and if you don't you are a bad and unforgiving person. It's just so contrived and heavily 'authored' that it has no realism. Or hey, i know you are a child and you don't like hitler so that means you know what he would have used as a secret password right? - 'well he was german and arrogant so his password is obviously going to be hitler_is_the_best'. - 'oh right, that's so obvious i should have thought of it myself!'

You made a good point about Hageid's speech patterns. Robbie Coltrane said in an interview he used a northern westlands accent, or close to. So Harry would become 'Harr-ee'. And Hermione would become 'Hurr-my-owe-nee'.
It's a phonetic difference in his speech pattern that can be achieved in print by sounding out slowly and phonetically spelling Hagrid's words.