Love, love, love! Such a brilliant and sweet story! I was so sad and hurt for this Edward and Bella but somehow you made everything perfect. You are truly a wonder and a talent. Much love!

OMG! Edward can't leave her now! They will never find each other again.

Reads like plagiarised movie shit

I'm reading over this story because it was soo good. I'm trying to remember if ages were put in it. How old is Edward and Bella?

Thank you for such an amazing story, really enjoyed it.

Aw this was just perfect. Heartwarming, the character development! Bella’s anxiety and Edward’s determination balancing each other out to make this awesome dynamic. I’m in love with Edward, and Bella too. I really enjoyed reading this. I think I will check out your other works. I do hope this gets published someday, it’s very unique.

OKAY I’m loving this so much, I haven’t been able to put it down! Yes, there are minor discrepancies but nothing major that can’t be worked out, and totally understandable since you were working on it for so long!

THIS CHAPTER, when Bella bites her trembling lip as she glances at Edward while she makes pancakes, in direct connection to when Edward had realized that that expression was of stifled attraction! (Many chapters ago!) SO LOVELY!

Elliot is so stinking cute, my gosh. Bella is actually a whole villain! She really girlbossed her way into Edward’s pants…. Bella ‘I-Can-Fix-Him’ Swan!

Can’t wait to read more. Great writing. So many great scenes! The lavender fields one of them, but nothing tops the absolute chaos of the birth scene. WOWWWWW. You captured so many emotions so well. I love the way this is written, not at all pretentious, and I’m in love with how delusional Bella is. I think you tied the strings together so well, it makes for a great tapestry.

Thank you for sharing this, now I must get back to READING!

I absolutely loved this story with all the different POV. Store line was great and I couldn’t stop reading.

amazing story with great characters. did you end up publishing this? if so what are they under i would love to read more.

I'm confused who did she sleep with?

Omg one of the best stories I’ve ever read on here. I woke up at 630 am and grabbed my phone to finish reading lol

You’re an amazing writer! Ruthless and Ivory is my favourite piece of writing so naturally I wanted to read your other stories as well.

I have to say although your writing style is different here, you still manage to convey such depth and complexity of emotions and thought processes and everything! This story was a joy to read, I read it from start to finish in 2 days! Can’t wait to read the next

Thank you for sharing this story with us! I love Edward. Now I'm sad it's over! Beautiful story.

What the fuck?! I can't read fast enough hahaha

I started reading because I was completely intrigued and now I can't stop!