Reviews for Invincible
MattBlack chapter 14 . 9/28
LOL Thorpe is such a huge Karen... XD
MattBlack chapter 2 . 9/28
So Luna's TWIN boys are 3 and 1 yo? Lol...
Guest chapter 33 . 9/26
3rd time rereading this story. God I love it.
Fyr RedNight chapter 33 . 8/22
This was an amazing and wonderful story.

All in all it was quite the roller-coaster of emotions, from the pang of reading Earth ending to the final lines at the Anchorage, it was all heartbreaking, bittersweet and finally heartwarming...

Overall, I had a great time reading the journey of all these characters.

Thank you oh so very much for sharing this with us!
pincho chapter 33 . 8/19
A wonderful story! Thank you for sharing!
pincho chapter 11 . 8/18

That was better and more emotionally moving than any of the doomsday movies. I even cried a bit at some points.
pincho chapter 1 . 8/18
This is only the second end of the world story I've read in HPverse. The other was a star trek voyager crossover and was abandoned.

This is sooo much of a smoother transition and it starts on earth. Very interesting first chapter

The pairing of Harry and Hermione was very well done and made sense, not because of who they are but the reality of their stunted upbringing and the challenges such a thing would bring.
kirosyamcha chapter 25 . 8/10
If the colonials are squibs why does being around magic hurt them?
wolfdragonz chapter 33 . 7/20
I loved this story. You captured the despair and hope during the apocalypse so well.
Cimon117 chapter 1 . 7/15
please make more Harry/Hermione off world crossover! this is one of the best crossover harry potter fanfiction I ever read!
Clark959 chapter 33 . 6/30
2nd time reading this story and it is just as entertaining as the 1st. Excellent work.
therealarchangel chapter 33 . 6/27
Great story, and a nice ending, though I'm curious where the 4th Potter child went?

In Chapter 23, you write:

Potter nodded, and Adama realized despite the two older, experienced officers beside him, the young man had subtly taken charge. "You can tour our ship, of course. That was enough for Commander Delapina. We'll provide you some protection against the ambient magical fields."

Adama nodded as he accepted yet another drink. "When?"

Potter regarded him carefully. "How about now? If nothing else, I can show off Eddy."

Adama raised a brow. Down the table, Tannith chuckled. "Our admiral's wife just gave birth three days ago to a healthy baby boy."

You may want to go back and modify that section.
red1997 chapter 33 . 6/11
great story. Really loved it. Keep up the good work
Cwhit930 chapter 33 . 6/7
Wow a wonderful crossover. Thanks for another great story
Redfdragon chapter 1 . 5/26
second time through and still one of the best crossover fics I have had the pleasure of reading.
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