Reviews for Twenty Eight Years
slightly so chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
I liked it, it didn't seem like it belonged under humor very much-it's pretty sad, but i would love it when you have dialogue, you write instead of "Josh" "yes", write: "Josh," "yes." punctuation, :P but it's an original story, me gusta!
Anything But Ordinary chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
Okay i read all of your stories and i thoughthat they really captured the true emotions of the charecters. i especially like the ones from the campaign trail. keep it up