|Reviews for Almost Kissed|
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
I've got to say, most GV fanfics are pretty cliche and overuse plot lines but this one definitely stood out. Awesome use of the characters and I love Chi-chi's overreaction. Nice work. You should definitely expand
| ThalassicSkies chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Ha. Ha. Well some body said the wrong things.
| Shank-GxV chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Great story man it was funny.
| margarita chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
very funny nice.
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
continue this story!
| LightningGemini chapter 1 . 3/20/2008
Freaking awesome. Should of had more though.
| Alpha707 chapter 1 . 11/24/2006
This is the third fanfic of yours that i have read and I say it is a smashing fic! It was funny how Videl met Chi-Chi and how Gohan and Videl almost kissed. Great work.
| LinkOOT chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
I liked IT! Keep up the great work!
| Shadow Dreamer 27 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I know I'm only reviewing this two years after you posted it, but whatever...
That was AWESOME. One of thee best GhVi OneShots I've ever read!
Very well written too!
| kathy chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
That was so funny i am still laughing ~wipes eyes~ ANYWHO i that was one of the funniest storys i have read FLAMES:i think Chichi was a way over the top but the ending was funny with what Videl said.
| Gargoyal chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
The end? i think that you can make this fic longer and you have them going at the right speed. 3/all you fics that i have read so far have gone way to fast. 1 in 2 days, 1 in 2 months, and 1 in 9 months. no relationship can go from meeting to marriying in less than 10 months(that i know about at least) anyways i think you should exstend on this. ur choise.
| Pan chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
more! that was funny
| dark dragon 00 chapter 1 . 8/21/2004
very funny update soon
| zfighter chapter 1 . 7/23/2004
this is another one of those stories that i really appreciate. i wish there were a lot more like this and you did a good job with this story.
| Candyland chapter 1 . 6/2/2004
That. Was. AWESOME!