|Reviews for Broken Glass|
| Amy Rose chapter 1 . 9/2/2003
"DONNA, please stop. It's Christmas Eve." Yeah, please, don't turn into Bartlet with your inane trivia!:P
Anywho, loved it, as usual. My fave part was when Toby couldn't really finish so Josh took over.
Good. Good, great. Good, great, grand...uh, running out of adjectives, I keep using the same ones... Well, you know what I think!
(Gonna keep goin' with reviewin'!)
| Willow21 chapter 1 . 5/1/2003
Thanks :-) You're right, Toby's dialogue needed altering. I've now uploaded the amended version. Willow.
| Blank1234235 chapter 1 . 4/30/2003
Very nice way to work on the themes of Noel. If I had to mention one thing to work on, it'd be Toby's dialog. Other than that, an excellent piece.