Reviews for Harry Potter and the Rule of Three |
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Bronze chapter 4 . 1/19/2023 Merlin on a unicycle blindfolded! If all these charges are applied and adjudicated to be factual Good Ole Fumblemort would be serving multiple life sentences UNDER Azkaban if the magical public doesn't lynch him first! It wouldn't surprise me if it turned out that most of the staff of Hogwash were either under the long-term effects of several loyalty potions or charms or even both. All keyed to Good Ole Fumblemort himself. Of course, Good Ole Fumblemort could've amped up Vernon's temper magically and being as he's a muggle there'd be no trace of it. Vernon and Dudley Dursley aren't gonna be very happy campers fairly soon! Amelia will send he best and strongest Aurors to arrest the two for attempted murder of a minor wizard. And knowing Vernon and Dudley, they won't come quietly! Which means Vernon will be all but carried out of his house. Though it is possible that Harry in fact owns it. I've read a few where the Dursleys never paid the Morgage, and the house reverted to Harry's ownership because of it. Either way Vernon and Dudley will be spending time at Her Majesties Pleasure. Vernon might even get hot and cold running Dementors! How much more lucky can you get?! ;) Dudley might get luck and get sentenced to Juvie instead of Azkaban like his father. I don't know as you haven't even hinted at Petunia involvement in Harry's abuse. So, she could wind-up sharing Vernon's hot and cold running Dementors or serving a few years in a muggle prison for being an accomplice. But I doubt Amelia could make anything stick to Good Ole Fumblemort. |
Bronze chapter 3 . 1/19/2023 In most fan fics Good Ole Fumblemort is listed in the Potters Wills as a Witness ONLY! In a lot Sirius is listed as Harry's Oath Sworn Godfather with Peter Pettigrew listed as the Secret Keeper. In some I've read Harry was never supposed to even know the Duursleys existed nor was he supposed to attend Hogwash. But Good Ole Fumblemort wanting his weapon sealed their Wills and threw Sirius in Azkaban for life to gain control of Harry. These are some of the usual reasons why Good Ole Fumblemort keeps such a close eye on those Wills. If it/they were opened and read it would be disastrous for his political standing. It would also lead to Harry getting new a guardian(s) who would not abuse Harry. Would not see him as only a tool for greater power. Good Ole Fumblemort ain't as Light as he wants everybody to believe! |
Bronze chapter 2 . 1/19/2023 My only question is, how soon will Good Ole Fumblemort try to destroy their friendship? If there's anyone who dearly deserves to die, it's Good Ole Fumblemort followed closely by Malformed. I'm really surprised everytime by just how stupid the order are. Not a one of them can think for him/herself. Good Ole Fumblemort tells them not to hurt the Death Eaters while dodging lethal magic from said Death Eaters. It's plain to anyone with maybe a Billionth of an active brain cell that way leads to an early grave. So, what is the true reason that Good Ole Fumblemort is protecting the Death Eaters? I have some ideas but no proof. Harry and Luna becoming friends is very good for both of them. Both are rather lonely. |
Bronze chapter 1 . 1/18/2023 And if Good Ole Fumblemort has his way, Harry'll be right back at his oh so loving relatives house as soon as he's released. Of course, that'll be a lot sooner than the Medi-Witches and Wizards would want but Good Ole Fumblemort would see it done! He already knows about the abuse but doesn't care. |
Guest chapter 12 . 1/10/2023 Where is Remus |
ranielpaulvillamor25 chapter 27 . 1/2/2023 Great story! One of the more solid ones I’ve read. But too many plot holes and unanswered questions for my liking. For example: -You mentioned that the Potters were part owners of the “Daily Prophet” when he read his Family account statements and Harry had an “evil” idea on how to deal with them. But somehow, throughout the story, they just got one sidedly harassed by the newspaper without them being able to do anything to retaliate. -The absence of Remus Lupin all throughout the story is very odd. Especially as the dude who taught Harry the Patronus, he should at least have shown up somewhere in the middle of the story. -Using the special “Point me” charms of the goblins, they found Gaunt’s ring and Rowena’s diadem. But why were they not able to pinpoint the snake? It seems you may just have forgotten about Nagini until the part when the Horcruxes were needed to be destroyed. The wasa loose end on Harry’s |
SHWAT chapter 9 . 12/19/2022 Seems a bit far-fetched that he deducted all that from so little information. Harry never was that bright. Not many kids are that intuitive at the age of 14. |
SHWAT chapter 10 . 12/19/2022 A flawed statementI want to split the profits into seven equal sections: half for me, and the rest divided equally between HG, GW, RW, PC, JFF, and CC," Those are not equal sections if Harry gets half of it. |
Rads chapter 27 . 11/14/2022 A lovely story and a very satisfying ending, especially the end of the death eaters. Really sorry to hear of your wife's health issues... here's hoping she improves quickly. All the best! |
kase519 chapter 27 . 11/6/2022 I really hope things are going OK for you. It’s a really good fic that I enjoyed reading. |
Mikeblade chapter 26 . 10/23/2022 right pureblood malfoy sr says he knows the dark lord is a half blood but does not care that makes no sense and destroys there whole pure blood crap making it a bigger joke then it all ready is |
RyMalice chapter 24 . 10/8/2022 What really confuses me about your story is that the Ministry is denying the existence of Voldemort and his Death Eaters still being active, yet the Death Eaters attacked Diagon Alley in broad daylight, and then both groups stormed Sirius' home together. Why would they work together at this point? It just didn't make any sense. |
LunaShadowWolf chapter 27 . 10/7/2022 this was an awesome and well done story :) |
hdres chapter 13 . 10/5/2022 Just went everything seemed to be going so well Voldemort appears. I am enjoying your story and how Harry is starting to change and grow. Thank you for sharing your writing |
hdres chapter 7 . 10/3/2022 Interesting chapter. I like the way Kingsley neutralises the faculty. Legal due process seems to have escaped the magical world. Thank you for sharing your story |