Just went everything seemed to be going so well Voldemort appears. I am enjoying your story and how Harry is starting to change and grow. Thank you for sharing your writing

Interesting chapter. I like the way Kingsley neutralises the faculty. Legal due process seems to have escaped the magical world. Thank you for sharing your story

I am enjoying your story particularly the way Amelia is cutting through all the issues. Thank you for sharing your writing

I like it, but William of Ockham weeps over your work with the razor to his neck.

If Harry is a horcoux, why dose it not point at him as well?

Love it!

I never understand why Dumbledore is always dismissed from his positions of Chief Warlock and Britain's representative to the ICW but is always left in place as Headmaster where he has access to all of their children even when they're informed of his shenanigans that he's pulled in endangering them. Who would want him in charge of their kids? I'm not criticizing your story and am enjoying the fact that someone is, unlike in the books, finally taking care of Harry. I am just curious as to why authors all leave him at Hogwarts where he creates more mayhem.

Lovely story, the romance bits were nice, and the progression of events felt realistic, the bit with Snape polyjuiced as Harry was genius, but I wonder, what was the deal with Lupin? Why Moody didn't help? How come Snape did a 180 degree change all of a sudden? Also, it would have been nice a little more info on Snape and Dudley in the epilogue. Anyways thanks for writing, and I wish you and your family the best, virtual hugs for everyone

There is a huge part of me hoping that this pairing [Harry P., Hermione G., Susan B.] is just Harry and Hermione with Susan as a sister/friend but I think it won't be. As enjoyable as this has been I am in two minds to continue reading or let it go.

I mostly really enjoyed this story. I sort of scrolled on past the M stuff. I love your plot with Amelia and how rational the adults all were. Except Dumbledore of course! Dracos role was brilliant and the horcrux hunt was very well done!

I expected a flight from UK to, say, Fiji to go via Asia, with stop in India or even Singapore. Guess not.
Via US, total flight times must be well over 24 hrs.
British Airways:
Served ~5 oz sodas. One hour into 12 hour flight, snacks were gone. About 2-3 hrs into flight, sodas were gone. About 5 hrs into flight, toilets were failing. I'll bet none of that occurred in first class. I was stuck near three stinking toilets for most of the flight with kids that were out of control and squirting water out of the sinks at passengers. Yeah, let's hear it for BA..

Going to kill Molly or MoRon? Both would be nice, though Molly is not quite her self in this story.

And again, Bumblemore gets away with crimes like a Clinton.

Where the hell are the unspeakable? They should have been there a few days ago. Hasn't Amelia talked to Croaker yet?
Would have thought Luna would be at least one of Harry's girlfriends.

Will you be able to bring justice to Harry and Bumblemore? Nobody else ever seems to punish the old man.
PS: Dudley would have squished without ever thinking about asking. This makes me think you too will protect the old man