FABULOUS

You set a realistic pace. Makes the story believable and approachable

Nicely done.

Realistic interview.

Interesting how Amelia is not a Bones

She should have know her aurors are in Dumbles’s pocket

Nicely done

Luna deserved so much than the perpetual victim canon portrayed

No need to apologize

No excuses for Poppy

This is a terrific story

I hope this is not a !JerkRon fic, he is a cool guy to be honest, most of fics just portray him aa a jsalous bastard without a character development

Of all the fics regarding Dumbledore's manipulations this is one if the best ones.

I can see Dumbledore talking with Harry in the future be like "Harry, I can't believe you turnued those minor problems into a DMLE investigation, I suggest you put down on that, I'm disappointed, you are turning Dark, my boy"

I have read this before and I am reading it again. It is a good story. Sasha

That's a doomsday event in the making.

I'm hoping that Fumbledore will get his cummupins and end up in Azkaban or fleeing the country with only his clothes on his back and without a knut to his name. Spending the rest of his life on the run, always barely ahead of his pursuers sounds like a good punishment, Azkaban wouldn't last long enough with how old he is.

I definitely approve of the long term injuries list, Vernon doesn't strike me as the kind of man to not accidentally or purposefully break the bones of a child he's abusing or to get him medical treatment. The man is massive and a malnourished young child is very fragile.

Thanks for this story, it has been a lot of fun to read.

Hi. I just wanted to say that Harry already knew at this point that Neville's parents were tortured into insanity.