Reviews for Innocence Farewell
Silver Sailor Ganymede chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
I didn't expect this to be a poem when I read the summary. Anyway, this was really good. You've captured how Severus may have felt perfectly!
Jeanne chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
Hey kiddo. Hadn't seen this one. Very sad and depressing. Realizing you've made a mistake that can't be taken back can hurt a lot... good work
Baka brian chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
woah ... real god
Lachriel chapter 1 . 9/16/2003
EErie. Depressing. Good.
l05t1n5p4c3 chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
That was wonderful and sad, if you know what I mean. I wasn't expecting a poem when I read it but it really was good. I think it captures what Severus would feel after killing someone even though he's had an entire childhood to prepare him for it very well. *applaudes*
Aryuter chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
Superb.
Enfleurage chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
It would be nice if you'd labeled this poetry, rather than Drama/Angst.
Chibi-Crysti chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
that's SO cool! You're a good poet!
Kemenran chapter 1 . 4/22/2003
Wow. That's sad.
IceCole chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Nice I especially like this part:

This mask I wear,

It brands my skin,

Scorching iron,

I’m caving in.