Reviews for Weeping For a Missed Chance
mische chapter 1 . 8/9/2005
Oh, I liked, I did. Especially the "message in the threads of these clothes" part. I absolutely loved The Great Gatsby, especially the style. I think you captured Daisy very well...weeping "stormily" and then quickly getting over it. Well done.
anon63 chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
I liked it a lot. I like the short lines and frequent breaks... very.. idk.. captivating.. and yes i am a Gatsby fan to some degree ;D
chibibaka1 chapter 1 . 1/16/2004
That was really good! I'm in the middle of The Great Gatsby right now. I'm really enjoying it. This was a great fanfic!
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capnBlack chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Hi! I love the way you weave all the different symbolism & imagery together in this piece. You put an interesting spin on Daisy's character. I particularly loved your imagery of Gatsby at the end (like a dying star). Pure brilliance :-). Keep up the great work, i'd love to see more Gatsby work!

capnBlack.
nikki chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Very good and write more fan fic
Juni Cortez chapter 1 . 5/13/2003
I agree with the other reviewer; this captures their relationship perfectly.

Your writing had almost a sense of timelessness. The moment seemed to encompass everything. All in all, it was lovely.
Tam Lynne chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
This captures the spirit of Gatsby and Daisy's relationship perfectly. Nice job!