|Reviews for Achieving Invisibility|
| Jellyjade Bean chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Tis dreadful sad.
That's a cool idea though.
| Aria chapter 1 . 4/28/2003
More than terrific job, Mari. Original, quirky, ironic, twisted... it's got 'Mari' stamped all over it. Now go write more. :P
| munchi chibi chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
heh, it's cool cuz it's kinda twisted, kinda ironic.
nice work with the whole "face gonna stick like that" saying.
| PrettyInPink1 chapter 1 . 4/23/2003
That was really well done. Specially since youre not an H/G fan.
I also agree with you that its perfect just the way it is! to add more would be a little odd.
Just wanted to let you know i liked it alot!great job!