Reviews for Fate |
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CU1 chapter 30 . 2/24/2019 I hope Ron tells their friends his secret so he won’t have to lie to them. Also the moment for Ron and Daphne was really sweet, kind and relived. Another one is I understand that Neville thinks it’s ron who is the Heir of Slytherin and Harry is starting to agreed to Nev but Hermione doesn’t believe it, but I see she will give it a shot. Another great chapter. Can’t wait for the next chapter! |
MMax chapter 30 . 2/24/2019 Thanks for the newest chapter...maybe this time, Hermione would not turn into catwoman. LOL |
Guest chapter 29 . 2/23/2019 Really hope this is a ron/daphne story! Also your writing is great! Keep up the great work |
CU1 chapter 28 . 2/23/2019 are You planning to put Ron in the Tri-Wizard Tournament in fourth year, so instead of 4 champions we have 5 champions. Just a suggestion would love to see Ron go to the tournament. Also hoping for more Ron/Hermione! |
Guest chapter 9 . 2/23/2019 Please make it Ron/Hermione... pleaseeeeeee |
Guest chapter 4 . 2/23/2019 I knew it. He will be a slytherin. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 That's a great start |
CU1 chapter 29 . 2/22/2019 Holy finished all 29 chapters in 2 days and I have to say “wow” I’m blown away! I need to know what happened next! This is really good! Also I know you are more lingering to Daphne/Ron but I rather have Hermione and Ron instead just saying! Can’t wait for the next chapter. |
Guest chapter 29 . 2/22/2019 Wow. The most awaiting scene I am looking forward in second year is the dueling scene. Is Ron's secret is going to expose just like Harry. I am so excited for it. Hermione's crush on Ron is building. GOOD. I LOVE IT. |
Starway Man chapter 29 . 2/22/2019 The dates do make things clearer, yes, continue using them if you want. Hmm, you spent all of this chapter focusing on what was happening to the children in this story, and that's fine - it takes talent to describe things from the POV of a twelve-year-old (thirteen in Hermione's case). Most of it was described very well, as usual, although I couldn't help noticing Blaise fallaciously assuming Tom Riddle jnr was probably dead by now - I mean, wizards and witches can easily live over a century, and Tommy wasn't even 70 years old by that point; just because he disappeared, doesn't mean he's dead! But again, as you say, they're only twelve and you can't expect miracles, despite all those kids learned about the Gaunts. Anyway, there were some good possessed!Ginny scenes and angry!Ron scenes, and I promise I won't hate Daphne (although you get the feeling that Hermione is winning that little contest right now; did she transfer her crush from Lockhart to Ron?), and I definitely look forward to seeing how you handle the blood on the wall and the dueling club! |
Niel2804 chapter 29 . 2/21/2019 Wooow just Woooow... i love this chapter a lot. Ron's problem, Ron's worries so much angst, i felt goosebumps when Ron snapped to Ginny, the Combination of Hocrux and Ron anger is scary. I hope Daphne learn to control her jealousy... Can not wait for next chapter, have a nice day, i'll be waiting for next update, always... |
Blocklv55TheBookReader chapter 29 . 2/21/2019 I love this Tory, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Guest chapter 29 . 2/21/2019 Thanks for the chapter buddy. |
TheIndianMuggle chapter 29 . 2/21/2019 Wow, that was intense. Loved it. |
MMax chapter 29 . 2/21/2019 FRom the last chapter, if Cedric and Max rescued Ron in the restroom/loo within an inch of his life, would that be a life debt to them? if so, I am sure that C and M would not abuse the debt and use it fairly and wisely.-now this chapter, Ron is going thru so much. I am speculating that at least one other Slytherin will join Ron (and Harry and Hermione? and Lockhart?) to the COS. |