I’m very interested to see the dynamic once they leave her home. Will they immediately be with harry and Ron? Or will they be alone for a time? And won’t mcgonag come looking for him? Until next time!

I like having the grangers involved in this instead of just thrusting 2 teenagers on their own immediately

Really nice start! I love a good broken draco

You outdid yourself with this one. Building to a fever pitch and, best of all, I have no idea what might be coming. Bravo!

Have had second thoughts about this. McGonagall is an intelligent individual. Taking pity on Malfoy, looking for a means of safety, this is understandable. Placing his custody with a person his own age is ridiculous. Putting someone regarded as a murderer into a situation where he is completely unfamiliar & insecure is dangerous. In letters home Hermione must have mentioned & complained about Draco. The Grangers took him in without question, without safeguards? Not believable. Who is overseeing this 'solution'? Why method of contact does Hermione have if Draco snaps? What explanation was given to her parents for them to accept their daughters chief tormenter of the past 5 years? Has protection of any kind been offered? Is Draco completely housebound? Or is he a house guest with restrictions? Lots of problems. Next update soon. please.

Intriguing beginning. Too early to critique.

Well, that’s a good start. I really hope you continue.i like the edge you have put Draco on. The use of veritaserum is a plot twist,I would really like to know what questions were asked and the answers to them. Guess they are going to be a part of the story right? Waiting for the next update .