Reviews for At Last
Guest chapter 2 . 4/9
Not bad, but I'd love to see more detail in the sex scenes. The characters being more vocal. Awesome choice writing about Bughead! ,
bookobsessionxx chapter 2 . 4/1
Really interesting take! You wrote a really sweet story. Such a shame that it's only 2 chapters. I would love to read more and see how their love story progresses as adults. Oh and I definitely want to read about the reunion :D Anyways, just wanted to express my appreciation!
FuN FiFi chapter 2 . 9/27/2015
What a great Bunhead story! I really appreciate that you wrote a mature version of the characters. As teenagers, we don't always realize everlasting love, but when we're older, we learn to recognize it. Your Betty finally saw Jughead for the gem he is, and he of course was an exception to the norm for knowing his feelings for the blond from the very beginning. All in all, you did a wonderful job w/ this story! You're a very talented writer! :-)
chr1steh chapter 2 . 4/6/2015
I'm not usually the biggest fan of first-person POV stories, but this one was so well-written that I couldn't pass it up! LOVE BUGHEAD and thank you thank you thank you for writing this I wish there was more!
lejeuparfait chapter 2 . 4/26/2014
Oh my God...This was so good...I don't have words to express how good it was. Thank you.
sysy.lim chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
hi there! I really like the way you write! I'd just like to know, in , where can I find your stories? :)
MacyBear17 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
only one word necessary to express my feelings abt this fic - Perfect!

It was soooo good. Betty and Jughead are my new fav couple and this was one of the best fics I've ever read of them...

plz write more soon... I luv your writing and characterization.

Hugs :)
aamrun chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
Bautiful, heart breakingly beautiful.
akumaherutsu chapter 2 . 2/10/2009
Awesome i love Jughead!I was so happy when i decide to search him that you had a story thank you.
Kenwoody chapter 2 . 8/13/2008
This is rated T! Are you SURE!

Well, other than that mild shocker, I really liked it, and you represented the Jughead character well. The Betty character is a little more out there, but you still managed to keep up the believability incredibly well!

Good job, but please think about the rating just in case little naive kids find this (lucky for you I'm not naive or I'd yell at you for destroying my innocence ha ha!)
hinata061389 chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
I love this!

I love the pairing as well. Betty and JUghead had always been my favorite. :)

Keep it up. This made my day. :)

-Aisha Majutsu
theLilyflower chapter 1 . 4/12/2008
I loved Jughead's last line. :)
Shiva'sGirl chapter 2 . 1/27/2008
I loved it! I love Jug and Betty! I love this story!
Lzsmith8 chapter 1 . 1/10/2008
heh lotsa sexual tension in this chapter

i love it
The-Reporter chapter 1 . 7/15/2007 many archie stories

Even though they are against the rules!

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