| Reviews for I Am Mr Five |
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   matamoty chapter 9 . 7/25 update this i beg its amazing |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/14 I really wish you would continue this, or at the very least post a rough outline of what you had planned Alabaster and Vivi in particular. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/31 Gay. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 3/19 Adam never touch the forbidden fruit, do your research dumbass |
| Davidphantom306 chapter 9 . 2/18 please continue i've read this 6 or 7 times alredy and thirst for more |
| Elvira Silver chapter 9 . 1/24 Damn. I love stories that venture into the dark what ifs. It allows to see the original material in a new light. I really with there was more or hope there will be more in the future. |
| PandoraOfVanity chapter 9 . 12/10/2023 Well written just like your other novels, 10/10 |
| VamPyr00 chapter 9 . 10/24/2023 Well, overall this one was really good. Very enjoyable for a darker fiction in the world of One Piece. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 8 . 10/24/2023 Yeesh, feel kinda bad for Hina at this point. She might be a little dumb but I don't think it warranted all THAT as punishment. Then again...he'd already crippled and raped her so I guess breaking her completely doesn't change much. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 6 . 10/24/2023 Why is he acting like an idiot? It's a GOOD thing if they like him, so why is he acting like a dumbass about it? Also, have they ACTUALLY had sex yet? As far as I can tell, he simply pleasures her with his fingers or mouth and gets no gratification for himself... seems like a fucking simp to me. Not to mention turning down the advances of Mari, are we sure he isn't gay? I don't mind but we kinda need to know these things. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 5 . 10/24/2023 Damn...death by starvation is pretty hardcore. Not to mention it will take quite a while since they will inevitably try to eat plants and eventually resort to canabilism. On another note, I imagine the 'look' Goldenweek was giving Valentine when she reached out to touch her breast was more of a deadpan 'what the hell are you doing' kind of look. #awkward tension |
| VamPyr00 chapter 3 . 10/24/2023 Very nice. I'll be interested to see how he trains her though. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 2 . 10/24/2023 I definitely don't care about derailing Canon...but did he just level an entire city just to take out one girl? He definitely needs to train on controlling his power more. |
| VamPyr00 chapter 1 . 10/24/2023 I'm kind of skeptical about his personality but hopefully he will become immune to killing soon, considering the world he is now in. |
| Davidphantom306 chapter 9 . 9/18/2023 This is cool and unique i love it Hope u continue |