oh boi its gonna be gud gg

like all your other stories. I enjoy it.

your really going to have to change your name because Mr five doesn't have the same ring as shanks white bread or kaido

Thanks for the chapter. :D :)

You know it's a Lucifer because there was an attempt at getting laid, explosions, and a gory murder in the same chapter. Let's see how it continues!

Awesome, i always believed mr 5s' power had alot of potential and they were badly misused since he was short sighted, im glad that someone seems to agree.

I don't know where this story is going, so I'm gonna keep my actual review for later on.

holy shit, would it mean that if MR.5 where to take a leak and pisses over his hand by accident that the toilet bowl would explode?

This is really great ! I just hope you'll continue to update your other stories regularly...

oh shit, that world just took a nasty turn.
Valentine's got no clue what she just unleashed on the world and herself

This is fucking dope. Please continue this SOON.

Can't wait to see how he develops his powers, seems like a fun fic so far. I think I also really like the idea of the MC hanging around with Valentine, it's something I haven't seen before so the novelty is pretty epic on its own really.

Excellently done chapter, very enjoyable.

If Mr 5 does start his own pirate crew can I suggest Baccarat to join because the Luck-Luck Fruit is awesome.

More Please I Beg Of Thee Writer-Sama!

Great chapter man. I like edgy stories and you never failed to impress. I look forward to the next one. Great work.

excellent chapter