|Reviews for Strange Behavior|
| FireRuby chapter 4 . 8/9/2019
I loooooooove this! Great idea, and lol the dialogue made me feel right at home! Always excited to see a Ghost Trick fic!
Lol though at poor Sissel not getting it- sometimes I don’t either :-P
| Dawndragon the Storyteller chapter 4 . 1/24/2019
I am not ready for this to be the last chapter of this fic already, oh my gosh
-"Or Inspector Cabanella" AAAAAHHH OH MY GOSH
-Clueless Sissel is Clueless, coming from someone who loved "memory loss/explaining everything" scenarios for a long time, this is a Good Trope my dude
-"Idioms are probably a bad idea right now" XD
-THIS IS A HUMAN I WANT TO LOVE AND PROTECT
-THIS IS A HUMAN HE WANTS TO LOVE AND PROTECT
-"Okay, that was adorable." THA ADROABLE
-I will never be over this
-If this BroTP weren't already sailing...
-"Heh. That was fun." WHY DOES THIS SOUND LIKE ACTUAL GAME DIALOGUE, THE OLD SISSEL/YOMIEL SPRITE JUST POPPED UP IN MY BRAIN I SWEAR
-"or people will take it the wrong way and call the police" I SNORTED
-"hold on, crazy driver trying to merge." BIG MOOD, OOF
-"I'm happy you're my human" AAAAAAAHHAHHAHHHHHHHHH
-"You're all my humans. I own all of you." SDFGHJKJHGFSHJISHDJ
-Why does the phrase "You brought the meats" sound so ominous omw
-AAaaaaaahh and I don't even have to guess who just pulled up behind them haha!
-I love that a bunch of police officers willingly censored themselves for the kids, they are the real MVPs
SDFGHJKLKGFDJSKJAALJAFAFL I LOVE THIS I LOVE THIS SO MUCH AAAAHHHH
I NOW HAVE A MILLION NEW HCS AND SO MUCH LOVE IN MY HEART
I AM S O GONNA REREAD THIS FOR VALENTINE'S DAY, MAYBE EVEN BEFORE BC. JUST, AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH, 1000000/10 MY DUDE, THANK YOU FOR THIS STORY, AMAZING AS ALWAYS CANDY
| Dawndragon the Storyteller chapter 3 . 1/24/2019
-I really love how you think she's using fudge as a pseud-swear but then it turns out to actually be fudge XD that may be the funniest thing in this chapter
-Cue Sissel Being a Typical Cat (okay but I may never get over this trope now)
-CAT BOI BEING AFFECTIONATE AAAHH
-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH IT'S CABANELLAAAAAAAA
-Okay but listen you NAILED his voice oh my gosh
-AAAAHHH I LOVE HIM "[he] whipped the bouquet behind his back" I TAKE BACK WHAT I SAID, THIS IS THE FUNNIEST BIT IN THIS CHAPTER
-"Sissel mocked the inspector's signature bow" I love Sissel's sense of humor, and it's fitting tbh since, well, stereotypical cat personality
-"...and strutted out of sight while throwing out random dance moves at random strangers" I LOVE THIS MAN
-I'm seriously grinning like an idiot rn, thank you
-Sissel, good grief dude, they don't want your mice XD (I... really hope he was a cat when he brought it to him. Granted, otherwise it WOULD be kind of hilarious...)
-"And then Sissel licked her hand" -"No more licking me, or anyone else, got it?" Rip eavesdroppers
-"My boyfriend. Friend who is a boy. Whom I like. Romantically." MOOD, AAAHH LOVE THIS
-"I guess some humans only show love to one other person, but that's kind of dumb" AAHH YES A MILLION TIMES, IN THIS HOUSE WE LOVE AND CHERISH OUR FRIENDS
AROACE LYNNE AROACE LYNNE AROACE LYNNE AROACE LYNNE
THIS ACE APPROVES THIS HEADCANON TO THE MAX
| Dawndragon the Storyteller chapter 2 . 1/24/2019
-I already love the idea of all these characters in the same room, this is gonna be hype
-Aaahh, and I love the contrast between Kamila and Amelie, even in just the little details! Like, obv, they're pals, but like, the description of their dolls makes so much sense with their respective backgrounds, esp since Amelie's family aesthetic is so "posh" for the lack of a better word, idk this is just a detail that I really liked
-Also, bless Missile for playing along with them, what a gooD DOGGO
-Ooohh hECK what a mood, I feel this in my soul, Lynne I feel you
-"Did you let the cat in the experiment room again?" I love the implication that Sissel has caused trouble during investigations before, and that everyone knows about this (Poor Lynne though ohmygosh)
-OFCOURSE BAILEY WOULD SUGGEST TO LEASH A CAT, his pal is right, cats do NOT put up with that haha
-"teacup cat" OKAY NEW FAVORITE TERM
-"sticking a paw against her face as if it would help him balance" BLESSED IMAGE
-OKAY I'M SORRY BUT AS SOON AS I SAW "spiked black hair" MY BRAIN IMMEDIATELY SHOT TO PHOENIX, WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME (ILYSM THO)
| Dawndragon the Storyteller chapter 1 . 1/24/2019
AAAHHHHHH HECK YEAH, I CAN READ THIS NOW THAT I'VE FINISHED THE GAME
-CAT SISSEL CAT SISSEL CAT SISSEL
-I AM DYING, THIS MENTAL IMAGE OF SISSEL JUST YEETING THIS VIAL AND THEN BEING LIKE "Eh" PRICELESS, A CAT CHARACTERISTICS
-Ooooohhh Kamila as a science geek is a hc that I haven't considered but I am All Here For It
-AAAAAHHHH AND THEN THIS IMAGE OF SISSEL FACING THE INSIDE OF THIS DOOR AND KNOCKING, IT'S JUST SO RIDICULOUS AND I LOVE IT
-I honestly now see 99% of their conversations as "USE YOUR HANDS" "Oh right lol I knew that"
-AWW HE'S LOOKING OUT FOR HIS BUDDY
-OH NOOOOOOO SISSEL
-AAAAHHHH "how many dangerous situations can we throw Missile into before he's killed and Sissel has to use his almighty powers to bring him back to life" AAAHH I LOVE THESE RECKLESS BOIS, BUT AT THE SAME TIME OH NOOOO WHY ARE YOU LIKE THIS
AAAHHHHH THIS IS TOO GOOD I AM DYING
| FirstFandomFangirl chapter 4 . 1/11/2019
- wait what's a clicker. I should know this. what is a clicker
- but DO NOT give chocolate to cats OR dogs
- "for girls, anyway. or inspector cabenala"
- I bought both my brothers necklaces in hawaii as souvenirs. they wore them for a while before losing interest!
- of course they were shark tooth necklaces
- LYNNE PAY ATTENTION IF YOU CRASH AND DIE I SWEAR (I mean... sissel can bring people to life I think so it'll be fine)
- "uh... decorate?"
- "I'd rather have food" ok mood because I am obsessed with food but if anyone gave me flowers I think I would cry because no one's ever bought me flowers
- "like claiming ownership?" yes, but not worded quite so creepily
- "this is a human I love and want to protect"
- *gently paps*
- "baths are an atrocity that should never have been invented"
- THIS IS SO GOOD HOW DID YOU WRITE THIS IN LIKE 1 DAY
- sissel questioning human rituals is absolutely hilarious
- "doesn't seem like it would get much dust off" HA
- HES SO CUTE MNSHGHfSGS
- "you're all my humans"
- wait isn't yomiel the one who was in jail?
- (with modified lyrics)
- oh mood. humans are weird
- absolutely wonderful fic. 11/10. still absolutely amazed you not only produced a fic of this length but also of this QUALITY in 1-2 days. absolutely stellar.
| FirstFandomFangirl chapter 3 . 1/11/2019
- "aw FUdge yeah, FUDGE" same
- "smells like raw sugar" and? I mean it's also poisonous for cats but- wait do ghosts eat
- why is she so confused don't normal people bump their heads against other people to show affection
- oh wait
- fun fact, one time my dad was curious as to how you could tell what meat was better based on its' appearance so he had me and my sister research it and write an essay on it. anyway meat with more lines in it is better
- "absolutely DAPPER"
- if you hadn't informed me otherwise I would have been positive Cabenala was her boyfriend
- "walking the store without partners" I mean... aren't most people who are at a store at all gonna not have a partner? who takes their girlfriend grocery shopping on a date (I mean my parents do but they're like, old people)
- "they're just jealous of my radiant beauty" I gotta look her up now
- SHE'S BEAUTIFUL?
- sissel hissing at cabenala is so validating because when I was younger I would legit hiss at people when they made me mad
- now I just snarl
- "mr white coat"
- lynne you have to understand how confusing this is
- but did he just like,,, did he just walk into the house carrying a squirming mouse "here you go bro"
- or did he carry it in his mouth
- was he in cat or human form
- I NEED DETAILS
- OH SISSEL HONEY NO
- "my boyfriend who is a boy who is my friend" me. same.
- "still don't know what money is"
- yeah hand holding. like headbumps
- "SERIOUS tutoring"
| FirstFandomFangirl chapter 2 . 1/11/2019
- how did you write 4 chapters in like? a day?
- I like the vegetables
- I actually googled what sissel LOOKED like in the middle of this and that is a much different image than what I had been thinking of
- wait he can also be a cat?
- "grab some potatoes" wait why why potatoes
- "drive, human" why don't you learn to drive you freeloader
| FirstFandomFangirl chapter 1 . 1/11/2019
- 2 seconds in and I'm cackling
- i LOVE the slow blink because that's a cat smile so that's basically the equivalent of him giving her a smug grin
- "pay attention to me" LITERALLY ME 24/7
- "you told me not to scratch" DOES HE HAVE CLAWS? DOES HE JUST DESTROY EVERYTHING?
- "I knew I could do that" I HAVE ALMOST NO IDEA WHO HE IS BUT I /LOVE/ HIM
- "is tomorrow... Love Day"
- "he says it smells /wonderful/ but you never /share any of the food/"
- SISSEL NO WHY would you DO THAT
- SISSEL NO.
- please give this silly cat child some lessons on being normal