Reviews for The Oncoming Storm
Jxgod chapter 7 . 4h
Lmao that inner monologue of robin at the end was hilarious. The audacity on that little brat.
Jxgod chapter 3 . 6h
Damn. Love how you expanded his skillset. Thats a Full Potential Percy if ive ever seen one
AuthorXX chapter 14 . 12/3
Black Canary sucks
Haydoge chapter 8 . 11/20
"Oi oi oi It's me mate a Superhero innit. Blimey and cheerio.
IgnisPrimus chapter 28 . 11/14
I am glad you a lazy fuck. Because then I don't have to see this story as much when I try to find good fics. Seriously, you have the gall to criticize people's works when you write this abomination of a story. What is it with retarded fanfic authors that make superhuman characters as weak as possible? Is it to make themselves not look like a fucking waste of fucking space compared to a really "cool" and strong character that is made so fucking weak? I mean are you so fucking pathetic that you have to write a strong character as weak as possible so that you don't look like such a sad embarrassment to your family in your head. Again thank all gods known to man that you are such a lazy cunt.
biob1 chapter 28 . 11/14
You kind of lost me with this chapter besides raven now being a villain in this no matter how temporary that might be you already kind of used this kind of cliff hanger with kaldur. Killing of characters can be shocking and impactful but I just don't feel it was done right. That last scene didn't feel shocking or impactful. While I admittedly didn't see it coming I wasn't shocked when it happened and that is a problem. You need to space it out the consequences and fall out of the last death have yet to be fully explored and yet your already on to the another one. This whole chapter just felt kind of sloppy.
biob1 chapter 16 . 11/13
Wasn't kent supposed to meet him and make a choice?
biob1 chapter 3 . 11/9
What is it with authors and making their dislike of certain stories known even when they have read them. I didn't need to know you don't like harem stories it felt more like you were saying it out of obligation than anything else and that is how it feels when other authors do it. It feels like you say it more out of obligation and to show how mature you are which I find just as if not more childish, hollow, and shallow than the stories you say you don't like. The only reason I am saying this is because I have been enjoying this story so far but it is such a turn off for me to see authors disparaging another person's work. That is what the comment section and the profiles are for, opinions like what I am doing now. I don't care if you don't like harem stories or want to write one that is your choice and right as an author but stuff like this makes me want to drop a story which again is bad because I like this story so far.
Also on a separate note I have no idea what rare pairing you could possibly be talking about there are not that many percy jackson / young justice or even dc crossovers so technically speaking EVERY pairing is rare.
biob1 chapter 2 . 11/9
Nice work
Guest chapter 28 . 11/6
With all due respect

Percy should be just as strong as aquaman, actually he should be stronger. He should be as strong as Diana, physically, without her blessings and bullshit powerups.
Guest chapter 28 . 11/6
Honestly I hate these types of fics. They always make and keep Percy weak.
biob1 chapter 1 . 11/8
Jl chapter 1 . 11/2
What lv is Percy strength and durability at I know he isn't wonder woman and Aquaman strong but it is superhuman.
I think his biggest strength feat was holding a ledge with one hand and annabeth with another whole she was attached to arachane and a small car and if I remember right anna lost her grip first and his biggest durability feat has to be surviving a volcanic eruption from ground zero
Guest chapter 28 . 10/27
Please update. This story is absolutely amazing and I am so glad that I was able to find it. Keep up the amazing story telling
Lurker In The Highlands chapter 28 . 10/28
So, issues:

What Percy is SAID to have done is not what we see Percy do. It feels like his powers are decreasing, not increasing, and he's growing weaker with every chapter. In the beginning, he was a powerhouse. Now? Barely able to handle Slade Wilson and kicked around by, of all things, a banshee scream? After a century in Tartarus and, by your description, leveling Themyscra?

One of these things is not like the other.

Next issue:

Batman is getting away with far, far too much. It feels Kaldur's death was a convenient plot device for Black Canary and Batman to avoid the consequences and the fallout of literally stealing Percy's blood, experimenting on it and contacting John Constatine for a hit. This isn't "hero" behaviour. This is "batman is expelled from the Justice League" behaviour.
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