Poor lonely Erik :-(

"Quite literally drown himself in desire"" hahahhah that's great.
THIS WAS SO HOT AHHH

Ouch, poor guy. I was sure from the description this was going to be some creepy voyeurism thing, with him watching Christine strip, but it turned out so innocent and desperate, I might cry! You are incredibly good at writing tragic erotica! Also, this totally happened, and anyone who says they believe otherwise is a liar!

Oh, I love this! The perfect mix of smutty and angsty! I can definitely see why you said it's one of your more popular works ehehe :)

I've read this a few times and it's high time I actually review! (Truly thought that I had)
I simply love this one shot. The way you describe Erik watching Christine eat the pear, is enough to make me drool. How innocent, yet extremely erotic.
When Erik's thoughts moving on to more daring fantasies, I follow willingly and I love how he struggles to get away when it all becomes too much.

The ending is awfully sad, but we all know poor Erik's fate. It doesn't change that this fic is absolutely delicious!

Ahhhh so like, this was super well done! I was a little wary going into it at first because the idea of Erik doing...his own little thing, behind a mirror, can get really uncomfortable super fast. But I think you described / handled the subject so well! Anyway, I really enjoyed this. Good job!

Fans self. Get on with your smutty self.

Hnnngggg, the HEAT and the ANGST! This feeds my soul!

I hope I already commented before because I'm gonna comment again. This is some gOOD SPICE

So I created my NSFW sideblog in kinktober because so many authors and artists were putting out so many tantalizing things. But this piece of yours, right here, was the catalyst, the one that pushed me over the edge, so good and so keysmash-worthy that I absolutely had to reblog it. And so it remains my very first post there! Glad you posted it here, too. :) Erik's building tension is utterly MADDENING.

Gah, poor Erik, he just does not cope well with any sort of stimulation at all. Good descriptions without being graphic, excellent build up to his flight and thoughts, his desperation and them response, and especially that ending shame. Bravo, bravo, very well done!

Such a great story! The conflict in Erik is so painful!

Beautifully written and expressed without the need for more explicit descriptions and words.

Poor Erik - not knowing how girls are. :)

Good job.

keep going, aaaaa