Is no one going to talk ab the character assassination of Lana? She’s the certified nice girl and constantly befriends outsiders or weirdos like Clark?

Also why is her name Hudson? Clark/e could very well be a girls name or Clara would easily work. And H.C. doesn’t flow at all.

That being said, I do love Clark and Lex’s relationship/friendship! I like how it’s progressing and can’t wait to see where it goes.

I wonder if Lois will be a guy or girl

ehm I'll just say now um the text do like your typing style it like skips chapters. so may you could put spaces or sentences brakes.

Wow. It's been a long while since I read this story but it turned up still in my faves so I thought I would revisit. And here we go...

read it with 2 weeks

I love this fic só much *-* i'm reading it again and again and again.
Sorry for the bad english, i'm brazilian

I'm so happy I found this story again! Love it!

16 is the age of consent in Kansas

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damn i remember crying my eyes out watching the pilot ep, and i cried reading this too. the chapter is perfect 3 love it.

Fantastic Job! Took me a couple days to read it all and I absolutely love it! Can't wait to read more!

Why no Tina Greer?

I skimmed through the story for Lana and Hudson scenes. o_O I don't even like Lana!

You should write a horror story. That seriously freaked me out...

You know, it's a crying shame that you haven't gotten more reviews and recognition for this magnum opus of a fic. Your characterization of Hudson is spotless, engaging, and believable- she's quite possibly more interesting than Clark, honestly (okay, at least early-seasons Clark). Your understanding of Lex (and exactly what makes him attractive) is on a level I've never seen with any other Smallville writer, and it's easy to fall for him right alongside Hudson, despite the fact that unlike her, we all know how this story ends. I regularly find myself coming back and rereading this epic every year or so, and it only impresses me more with time. It's beautiful.

It's been some years since you updated. I suspect the muse has fled and you've moved on to other things. I don't feel cheated (not that it's about me- fic writing is a labor of love, you're not paid for it, and therefore you should do whatever the hell you like with it), because each chapter stands alone as a self-contained story and you've established your characters and themes so well that I can imagine the story's projection for myself. Still, if you ever find the inclination to revisit the 'verse, I'll be here eager to read and review. :)

Sometimes is feels ridicilous to leave a comment in such a story...
Is there any point in me saying, once again, just how great this story is?
I'm replying for chapter 1 but I'm already in chapter 7 and enjoying every minute of it...

How much will power can one person possess? I mean, those chapter must have took forever to write down and yet you've written 33 of them, and that's only the first part...(!)

I gotta say, You seem to have the creativity and the style for writing some best-seller books. I'll be standing in line to buy those books once they're out!

Once again, good job!