|Reviews for Downfall Series: Part One, My First Taste|
| Everin the everfree Dragon chapter 1 . 8/20
ehm I'll just say now um the text do like your typing style it like skips chapters. so may you could put spaces or sentences brakes.
| HowlynMad chapter 1 . 8/12/2019
Wow. It's been a long while since I read this story but it turned up still in my faves so I thought I would revisit. And here we go...
| Meitantei-Clark chapter 33 . 11/29/2016
read it with 2 weeks
| Mari chapter 1 . 3/6/2016
I love this fic só much *-* i'm reading it again and again and again.
Sorry for the bad english, i'm brazilian
| Babaksmiles chapter 1 . 11/17/2015
I'm so happy I found this story again! Love it!
| Midoriori chapter 10 . 7/26/2014
16 is the age of consent in Kansas
| monica218 chapter 5 . 2/16/2014
| monica218 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
damn i remember crying my eyes out watching the pilot ep, and i cried reading this too. the chapter is perfect 3 love it.
| Cattra1992 chapter 33 . 8/21/2013
Fantastic Job! Took me a couple days to read it all and I absolutely love it! Can't wait to read more!
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/4/2013
Why no Tina Greer?
| Guest chapter 33 . 7/2/2013
I skimmed through the story for Lana and Hudson scenes. o_O I don't even like Lana!
| Doctor Frostybuscus chapter 2 . 6/15/2013
You should write a horror story. That seriously freaked me out...
| Doctor Harley Quinn chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
You know, it's a crying shame that you haven't gotten more reviews and recognition for this magnum opus of a fic. Your characterization of Hudson is spotless, engaging, and believable- she's quite possibly more interesting than Clark, honestly (okay, at least early-seasons Clark). Your understanding of Lex (and exactly what makes him attractive) is on a level I've never seen with any other Smallville writer, and it's easy to fall for him right alongside Hudson, despite the fact that unlike her, we all know how this story ends. I regularly find myself coming back and rereading this epic every year or so, and it only impresses me more with time. It's beautiful.
It's been some years since you updated. I suspect the muse has fled and you've moved on to other things. I don't feel cheated (not that it's about me- fic writing is a labor of love, you're not paid for it, and therefore you should do whatever the hell you like with it), because each chapter stands alone as a self-contained story and you've established your characters and themes so well that I can imagine the story's projection for myself. Still, if you ever find the inclination to revisit the 'verse, I'll be here eager to read and review. :)
| Classic-Color chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
Sometimes is feels ridicilous to leave a comment in such a story...
Is there any point in me saying, once again, just how great this story is?
I'm replying for chapter 1 but I'm already in chapter 7 and enjoying every minute of it...
How much will power can one person possess? I mean, those chapter must have took forever to write down and yet you've written 33 of them, and that's only the first part...(!)
I gotta say, You seem to have the creativity and the style for writing some best-seller books. I'll be standing in line to buy those books once they're out!
Once again, good job!
| skywiseskychan chapter 9 . 2/19/2013
Amusing enough from the mothers first sentance I felt a deep and abiding distrust. And no I've never watched the show.
I also want at this point to say how much fun I am having with the contrast between the torrid emotions Lex instils compared to the still meaningful feelings Lana evokes.