|Reviews for Downfall Series: Part One, My First Taste|
| BleedingPolaroid chapter 33 . 3/6/2006
You updated, *Gives giant hug* great chapter and I can't wait to read more. This is my favorite fan fiction story that I have ever read.
| Phoenix Skyborne chapter 32 . 2/26/2006
Alright! Finally finished! I enjoyed it greatly. Hudson Kent is a wonderfully fleshed out character. Not just a female version of Clark, but her own person.
| SakuraSyaoran4eva chapter 32 . 2/9/2006
I don't mean to sound rude or anything - but u do realize it's been about 9 months since you last updated, right?
And I've been following this story since ch 1 and I really like this story - plus, I have to ask - how many times is the title going to be changed?
I'm so dying for more hudson/Lex! And I'm guessing that alien guy was Lex's cook at first and then he shape-shifted into the shrink? And what is Lional up to?
PS. Have you read Elbowface's version of female-Lex? The Frog and the Scorpion: (( . I know her series was inspired in part because of your brilliant writing - and it would so make her world if u dropped a quick note. I keep telling her she's just as good as you and she just goes "Whatever!"
| Phoenix Skyborne chapter 10 . 1/30/2006
This is a wonderful (and LONG) story. I always love these gender-switching fics. _ It's gonna take me a while to finish...
I noticed it hasn't been updated in a while... I hope you haven't abandoned it. It's so great!
| k chapter 1 . 11/22/2005
Oh my god I'm so glad I found this back! This whole series is great!
| BAKAMAN chapter 32 . 11/21/2005
I've readevery single chapter of this story and I think it really good! Please udate soon!
| korrd chapter 32 . 11/16/2005
Great fic. Will anything form between Hudson and Lana? Will it be a threesome? Lana/Hudson/Lex? Update soon.
| elbowface chapter 32 . 10/22/2005
where oh where are you aelora?
the angst/sweetness you've injected in hudson/lex's doomed relationship makes this such a deliciously tragic tale.
maybe, leave a note hinting at when a new chapter will show? sorry to be so whiny-it's only because i'm loving this story so much ;)
| holyhollz chapter 32 . 10/19/2005
Really really good... and now there needs to be ome more... please :)
| ficfanang chapter 2 . 10/19/2005
Hmm. Very interesting. Have to admit that the beginning of the chapter is rather confusing, though. It's like all of this action has happened while we weren't there, and now we're scrambling to catch up. Might want to clear up a few things. Like the Hudson/Lex thing, though, especially how hesitant they are with their feelings for one another. Plot developing nicely! Next chapter! ;)
| ficfanang chapter 1 . 10/19/2005
Wow, love it! Sorry I'm so late, but I just found this story. This is the first fic of this genre that I've read, and I love it. Actually, I have to admit that I haven't even seen the Smallville series, but what I've heard is pretty good. When I saw your summary, I thought "Oh good, I can catch up in a sense this way!" On to the next chapter, really enjoying this!
| t wrecks chapter 5 . 10/11/2005
I happened across this accidently, it is great. You have talent
| TripleLLL chapter 29 . 10/4/2005
I see it was in May since you last updated, I hope to see a new update soon! Please please please.
Your story and charcaters rock my socks! Please don't stop now darlin.
| Coriel chapter 10 . 10/4/2005
teehee. AJ...Alexander jr. HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH
| harish chapter 32 . 10/3/2005
WOW! this series is absolutely amazing-heard about it from word of mouth, and it was definitely worth the read!
it's really a testament to your writing that you're telegraphing the heart-breaking tragedy of this romance ahead, but that i'm still eagerly anticipating the next chapter anyway. thank you for sharing your creativity with all of us-ithas been a wonderful treat so far!