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I need to go back through earlier chapters to catch up with where you are with this. It may be that a short (stress short!) recap of the few previous chapters will be needed to help the reader stay up with where you are in your story given the fairly lengthy spaces between new chapters. Still, an interesting chapter with some very curious character development. Sirius' survival of Bellatrix seems a little odd. I fully anticipated that their battle would result in either their being separated by the action of the fight or that one would defeat the other and force a retreat, not choose one. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.

Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter

love the chapter very emotional i only have 1 thing i dont like about it, which is the trigger warning. Because there is a big difference reading about suicide and reading about an suicide attempt. Reading about suicide is a lot less "grim" than reading about an suicide attempt in my opinion. People like myself that have attempted to do so will be caught off guard and might get scared off because they were not ready for it.

Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter

This will be an interesting battle :)

You meant "one more reason they didn't get along very well".
I hope Sirius rips off not only Dumbles' beard but also his bollocks, that he used to think with about Lily and James Potter's will and its provisions.

You meant "I would rather die than follow Voldemort" and "first accused whose trail".
I wonder what Ragnok's business with Sirius Black is.

IMO Vernon Dursley needs Rubeus Hagrid's broomstick jabbed up his rectum repeatedly and as violently as possible for just refusing to sign Harrys' permission form to attend Sirius' trail.

You meant "Did McGonagall say anything".

I wish us readers could have read "Witches who made it".
You meant "getured around, talking fast" and "She frowned a little, reading it quickly".

You meant "quite soon. If you would?", "In that case I'm really sorry" and "lot of James' qualities".
JHRC! at the idiotic cornelius fudge trying to implement the kiss on sight order the instant he and that sodding dementor were inside Hogwarts and Dumbles' office.

Nice fanfiction so far

This is better than most garbage but it lacks depth and like I said previously no one is really acting like an actual person. The fact that Remus and Narcissa both shrieked at hearing Voldemort was ridiculous and nobody fears the name Voldemort but they fear the fact that he cursed the name so that whenever someone says it he is made aware of their location.