Reviews for Three little words
Church21 chapter 18 . 12/18/2024
In the authors note at the beginning it said he’d distance himself from Ron so i guess I thought it would kind of push the weaslys out of the story with him. Get something bit different going. Wasnt a big fan of the family in cannon like then less in fanfiction. PS. Muggles suck!
Church21 chapter 17 . 12/18/2024
Okay kept trying but really cant stand this version of Harry. Hes crying every chapter and generally just acts like a little bitch. He ran off and pouted because Narcissa insulted the weasleys and Hermione. Like what the fuck did he think she thought about them? He went to school with her son who struts around yelling Mudblood at the top of his lungs. If this kid is so pathetic he looses his shit at the word mudblood hes gonna be eaten alive in the wizarding world. Like what did ge expect. That Narcissa would call out her eternal love for all things weasley cause they are nice? This is a very interesting story idea but this kid needs to grow the fuck up. He made it a point to want to learn how to act like a lord from her and if hes gonna act like a bitch he might as well just go hang out with the ginger muggle cheerleader brigade.
Church21 chapter 13 . 12/18/2024
Ya know; JK Rowling did about everything she could to keep Harry a fairly unremarkable wizard. By the end if the series his best combat spell was a disarming charm and his most impressive feat of magic was a patronus which is a spell with a fairly limited use. I’d have to say my biggest criticism of his cannon self though is how utterly undipenndent he is completely unable to do anything on his own without his friends around. One thing she did give Harry was a fairly strong mental fortitude though. That kid could shrug off about anything. This version of Harry seems to be about the same magically speaking but without the mental strength of his cannon counterpart. He is at this point nearly 14 only a few years from adulthood but he acts about 8 or so and Serius treats him like a toddler. Reaching down and patting him on the head for feeling bad about seeing Cissa crying like its an accomplishment when its a pretty normal human reaction. All im saying is Harry has had a pretty shit life and its only gonna get tougher from here with Voldi coming. Its a good story idea and i’ve liked the world building so far but not the biggest fan of this version of Harry. Really hope this doesn’t end in a Harry/Hermione pairing cause i really prefer their brother sister relationship and will probably insta quit if this starts to look like it will end up Harry/Ginny hate that pairing so much. Anyway this wont change much given how far along this story already is but really hope a 14 year Harry starts acting like a 14 year old soon
JinchuurikiKeyblader117 chapter 97 . 12/10/2024
Great chapter, but it's marred by how the twins acted at the end. Saying "it needed to be done" just doesn't sit well and seems out of character for even how you've written them. That's treatment they'd have given someone who intentionally hurt their sister, not their friend who was trying to end things before he actually hurt her
Guest chapter 111 . 12/1/2024
Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter
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LifeIsAGreatAdventure chapter 111 . 12/1/2024
I need to go back through earlier chapters to catch up with where you are with this. It may be that a short (stress short!) recap of the few previous chapters will be needed to help the reader stay up with where you are in your story given the fairly lengthy spaces between new chapters. Still, an interesting chapter with some very curious character development. Sirius' survival of Bellatrix seems a little odd. I fully anticipated that their battle would result in either their being separated by the action of the fight or that one would defeat the other and force a retreat, not choose one. Thanks for your hard work on this, looking forward to future installments.
Guest chapter 110 . 10/6/2024
Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter
Guest chapter 77 . 10/5/2024
love the chapter very emotional i only have 1 thing i dont like about it, which is the trigger warning. Because there is a big difference reading about suicide and reading about an suicide attempt. Reading about suicide is a lot less "grim" than reading about an suicide attempt in my opinion. People like myself that have attempted to do so will be caught off guard and might get scared off because they were not ready for it.
Guest chapter 110 . 10/5/2024
Amazing can’t wait for the next chapter
magocrat777 chapter 110 . 10/6/2024
This will be an interesting battle :)
alix33 chapter 8 . 10/6/2024
You meant "one more reason they didn't get along very well".
I hope Sirius rips off not only Dumbles' beard but also his bollocks, that he used to think with about Lily and James Potter's will and its provisions.
alix33 chapter 7 . 10/6/2024
You meant "I would rather die than follow Voldemort" and "first accused whose trail".
I wonder what Ragnok's business with Sirius Black is.
alix33 chapter 5 . 10/6/2024
IMO Vernon Dursley needs Rubeus Hagrid's broomstick jabbed up his rectum repeatedly and as violently as possible for just refusing to sign Harrys' permission form to attend Sirius' trail.
alix33 chapter 4 . 10/6/2024
You meant "Did McGonagall say anything".
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