Reviews for Three little words |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was annoyed with you in the beginning of the chapter with how emo Harry has become but you definitely redeemed yourself by the end |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far. Please update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ginny is no good for Harry. She prompts underage drinking and stealing. Hermione is being a pompous jerk, and the staff remains oblivious that Harry was kidnapped and tortured. They keep treating him as if nothing happened to him. Harry needs to let loose and let it fly on McC. She's never had his back and never will! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please! Don’t hurt Andi and Ted! I loved the brawl scene! I can’t wait to get rid of Ginny lol Thank you for writing! ️️️️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Bellatrix visits her sister. Awaiting more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved Lucius getting more angrier as Sirius continually interrupted. Well done. I’m enjoying the story. I have to turn off my editor brain while reading because the errors drive me nuts, but the story itself is sound. Can’t wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's fine and all, but Harry was kidnapped and tortured. His friends and teachers act like he sneaked off to go to an amusement park They are they bad guys here. How much death does one student need to endure before McGonnagal and Hermione pull their heads out of their asses? They are being incredibly self-righteous. With friends like that who needs enemies. |
![]() ![]() Stupid woman...there is diffce betn teleport and apparate...limit ur urg pathetic cow |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story. Decent premise and plot line. There is one problem. This story needs a beta or a grammar check badly. There a very few spelling mistakes, but the grammar mistakes are plentiful. It looks like you ran the story through a spell checker that corrected words and completely muddled the sentence. As much as I would like to, I can not continue reading. If the story was overhauled and corrected by a beta then I would give it another shot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Disgusting mentaly compramised human being..Stupid woman...there is diffce betn teleport and apparate...limit ur urg pathetic cow |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I have never liked Ginny in canon. I think canon Harry was potioned much like canon Arthur. I never like stories where Harry got involved with Ginny even if it turned out later she was the wrong girl. Good luck with your story. |
![]() ![]() Do you know that your notes are almost 25% of your word count? In spite or that, I think that this is a very good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but I can't read anymore of this asshole Harry Potter, good luck with your story though. |