Reviews for Three little words |
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![]() ![]() ![]() You said Draco wan't violet. It know you meant violent, but it was funny nonetheless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Narcissa is too weak for my test. She constantly harangues Harry, but the least little word from Draco, sends her reeling. On top of that, Minerva is too much of a tight ass. She constantly berates Harry. She needs a chill pill. And, Ginny is creeping me out. You're not doing a Harry/Ginny romance are you? She's such a stalker! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story, but you need a beta to check your spelling and word usage. Some things do not make sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry is a bit of a wimp. Anyone can press him into doing things he originally doesn't want to do. Hermione did it, the Daphne did it with the egg. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are young boys really that stupid? Get that slag off him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm waiting for Ron's jealousy to kick in and if Harry's academic performance challenges Hermione's there will be trouble. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it’d be interesting if Harry invited Dudley to watch the Quidditch World Cup. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() At least you showed some of the real Narcissa finally. You made her a goody two shoes so far. She is way too nice for Narcissa Black Malfoy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The relationship of Sirius and Cissy is too weird. It seems like their married instead of cousins, and that's gross. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ignotus was the third son because he was the was the one with the cloak. |
![]() ![]() ![]() To Americans cloth is something you make clothes out of it. Using cloth is like saying wool or silk or cotton. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you mean crap not crab? |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's Alice Longbottom not Alica. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stire is not a word; it's stir. Stire is not a word, but you used it twice. |