Reviews for Angels and Demons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Grossly glossing over events such as the quelling of Voldemort and the DEs leaves a lot to be desired... a lot. It also feels like you’re trying to compress a lot more stuff in the same amount of words as the earlier chapters, which is detrimental to the story. There’s nothing pulling me in to it anymore. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool chapter continue please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter |
![]() ![]() Chaos is a happy doggy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please pair Zack and Aerith together and Cloud/Tifa |
![]() ![]() Prompt: The secret magic of Sirius platoon Harry Potter is Manabu Yuuki Manabu Yuuki was a habit of making sleeping nest in the most weirdest of places. He is also the reason for the more stringent baggage check on SDF luggage. Because unlike his brother the reason he was one big one the day his father 'died' was because he had fallen asleep in his dad's rucksack, scared the shell out of everyone when popped his head out of the bag in front of the Sirius platoon members. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it... was kinda hoping dumble was still alive when they summoned him... thank u for the update |
![]() ![]() Thanks so much for updating I have missed your updates |
![]() ![]() Thanks for the update I've been waiting for it since forever...update sooon pleeeeease |
![]() ![]() ![]() I might be enjoying this far too much, but I don't even care! |
![]() ![]() So funny this chapter. I can't wait to read what happens to Voldemort. Thanks for writing this and I can't wait until you're able to write and post another chapter. I hope you had a great Valentine's Day. |
![]() ![]() Prompt: Harry Potter/ The adventures of the galaxy rangers While the first decade of his life was way to similar with a few glaring differences. 1 He was the unknown cooking ninja of wolf den. (Food appearing for the others) 2 He knew how to play the good boy routine to keep attention off the others. (The incident still happens cause whiner is a lousy and cowardly politician) He is going to make sure the board can't cryo his 'team', he know the series 5 implants are going to be seen as another weapon for them. Although if they have to play bad guy their is going to be a viable reason other than a sudden criminal inclination. |
![]() ![]() Oh goddess... SOLDIERS Unleashed. May there be some local deity that will take pity on their mortals, who won't also Offend said SOLDIERS. They'll probably need it. 3 |
![]() ![]() very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Zack, everyone's beloved Puppy. XD |