Reviews for Angels and Demons |
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![]() ![]() ![]() As always this is just really awesome and I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful chapters, thank you for the update. i look forwards to reading more as you share it. many thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...Have I ever mentioned that you're amazing? Because it needs to be said. Another world? Eh... Seems legit. Though I do wonder how Rena would react to meeting Noctis, in a general sense anyway they're both people who got screwed over by prophecies they wanted nothing to do with and it would be interesting, and knowing you... Person... Ms/Mr... You would make it work. I'm bad at this type of thing. Good luck with writing, and keep up your amazing work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was amusing |
![]() ![]() ![]() I will say that one thing i believe would really help this story is more dialogue and reactions to certain events. The reaction to Rena coming through the portal for example just seemed...skipped? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw... you should do a flashback chapter to show EXACTLY what happened when Sephiroth was accidentally dragged to the Harry Potter universe instead of Serena. How did Hermione and the others TRY treating him when he first arrived, thinking that they could make the MALE 'past life' version of their missing FEMALE savior do what THEY wanted involving Voldemort like they SERIOUSLY thought tbat the 'past life' version of their saviot would feel inclined to fight THEIR war for people he DOESN'T know and DOESN'T care about since IF he was Serenas past life self, he had no reason to fight people he doesn't know and NEVER knew in his post-Serena life. *lol* and how close did he come to KILLING all of them by the time Serena and the others finally showed up? |
![]() ![]() ![]() The wizards are SOOOOOO Screwed. A pregnant Rena will be a sight to behold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So much happening! I wonder which world they will end up in... One Piece? That would certainly drown a fish in the sea ;) Where is Castle Black situaed on the map? Thanks for updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So any idea of the planet they will visit? Crossover or ending? By the way the plot keeps me on my toes the sema with glided cage. Looks great. Hopefully the muse will stay and everuthing go fine. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter Thanks for your work and the chapter Bye |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another world huh?Snow Leopard Pasha would enjoy |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like it a lot! ** |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol that was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the chapter!~ |