WHY, why was the bitch Alice is forgiven and allowed back in their circle. Fuck that shit.

Beautiful story. Thank you for writing such lovely characters and for making them learn and grow as individuals.

Noooooooooo!

He'd better tell her soon so she doesn't find a reason not to trust him too.

Damn this was a great story. I enjoyed it so much and I cannot compliment you more on being a great writer and storyteller. Of all the fanfics I’ve read, this is by far the best Bella and Edward written characters I’ve ever read. The evolution of Bella’s character growth was amazingly well written. Bravo!

Very cute

Wow, Alice! She is a never-ending font of hatefulness. There is no rationality. I’m honestly surprised she wasn’t nasty to Bella BEFORE Bella discovered them - she clearly is vindictive and was trying to win or something, and she’s still trying to. I hope she gets right.

Loved it…thank you

Yep, big applause, Bella. No other way for a kind, rational, and loving human to handle that.

Jasper and Alice got a whole lot more than some good fucking - and they deserve exactly what they’re getting.

Wow, Alice. WOW. She’s the most messed up of all.

That was immensely satisfying. Save for one part: I wish she’d made it fully and shamefully clear to him that she didn’t and would never have wanted him back, that there was no way Edward was anything other than a real thing and not the jealousy-inducing stunt he thought it was. He had the audacity to presume she wanted him back, and to presume his simple apology was enough to get her to cave, kiss him, and move on? Yeah, I feel like she could’ve handed him more of his ass. But it was still VERY nice. What a clueless dickhead.

*sigh*
*smiling*

y. S l o w.

Get with the ‘splainin’ so she can cut loose the person she already knows she’s not all-in for. Whether she’s all-in for Edward or not…Brady is not on the same page as she is, and he needs to know to start moving on.

Damn Brady moving fast, not picking up signals…

So maybe it wasn’t a spiteful relationship, but it doesn’t sound like it’s a big deal to her, either. Though it was pretty predictable she’d have it. It was easy. It was mindless.

I just hope she can get to the heart of where her heart is before she gets any further with him.

Yep. Here comes a rage relationship with Brady. A “why the fuck not” where she refuses to deal. I hate it when people refuse to hear the whole story. Whether they believe it or not, it’s better than just, “no, don’t want to hear it!” Just fucking listen and then walk away or not. Jesus.

Somehow she chose fight AND flight by saying that. She’s standing up for herself but choosing to run from Edward.

Dammit. I guess there’s a shaky/spiteful relationship with Brady in her future now. Ugh.