Reviews for Break
ClarenceTheAngel chapter 21 . 2/11
Lovely story, loved the well crafted character development
Godschildtweety chapter 21 . 2/11
Cute
jlynw chapter 21 . 1/25
Lovely story with priceless metaphors! Like you said the end is bittersweet. Thank you so much for sharing️ Take are!
jlynw chapter 5 . 1/23
Whew, she said “okay”! I’m immediately proceeding to chapter 6. Thank you!
jlynw chapter 2 . 1/22
She’s been through it, sad and unfair ️
jlynw chapter 1 . 1/22
Wow, just started reading this story and just, Wow! I’m dropping everything and proceeding to chapter 2.
sherimi chapter 21 . 1/16
This was a great read
goldseadragon chapter 6 . 1/9
FFS, Bella, you never told him the name was Jasper! How can a connoisseur of literary minutae be so unobservatant?
Patriciadiane chapter 21 . 1/3
Love to the tenth degree this story

The Edward POV should be amazing. He is such a love.

I really want Alice and Jasper to grow up, pay or DISAPPEAR
Patriciadiane chapter 20 . 1/3
Just when I didn’t think I could fall more in love with these two JJ enters the story and shows what awesome humans they are and of course shows how Alice is the lowest of the low!
Patriciadiane chapter 19 . 1/3
These two have stolen my heart. Em as well. Rose and Vera too
Alice is truly a piece of work. Words fail me. Question swirling around my mind how is she pregnant - we shall see. I love how Edward gets her words!
Patriciadiane chapter 18 . 1/3
A boom deal. Yeah

Is Jasper delusional?
Patriciadiane chapter 17 . 1/3
Chapter 17...SCORE
Love the two of them
Patriciadiane chapter 16 . 1/3
Love this Bella. Her hard work to be her best person I’d inspirational.

These two are so wonderful
Patriciadiane chapter 15 . 1/3
Brady what a situation. Bella’s core values are strong and she knows herself well even if she doesn’t see it.

Edwards father is a piece of work. Pompous flawed and blind
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