Reviews for Cars and Secrets
heyits.reagan chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
thank you soooo much for this! i loved it :D can i give some constructive criticism here though? try not to use so many '…' because it kind of drags things on, much like a comma subconsciously makes the reader pause. i hope that made sense haha. but thank you again for the story! :)