I really liked it. I hope that you continue this story.

pretty good good luck this quater

that was funny

Babe, I love this story I really do, but part of the reason your having this mega, huge writters block, I think, is because you've gone and squeezed your brain dry of ideas and your getting bored with it. I sugest you do one or two more chapters and end it. It's a great cute funniy story, though I might appreciate it more because I know who and what your talking about in a littlemore depth, I love it. I also really hope your story wins the contest. See Ya.

I loved your story, write more!

KEEP GOING!

Sugoi! Sugoi! Sugoi! Kewl... Hirde is mad at Duo and also possesses a pair of scissors .~ I could've reviewed earlier, but the server was down at 5:00 AM ;;

How am I supposed to give you ideas when I'm in the middle of a long spell of write's block. Um. stuff happenes. There's a school dance coming uo and the boys need dates. There. Happy? Loved this part. 3 red alerts? That would be so cool! I bet some peeps would cry. I never noticed how y we can be. Damn! I'm still waiting for a certain sophomore to appear. *ahem*. Keep up the fantastic work! :)

Heero and Zechs really should just step out of Hilde's way and not protect Duo from his raging girlfriend. Tee, hee. Noin wouldn't protect him either I don't think. WRITE!

Heero? Unicorns? BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Shinigami save me, my ribs hurt. Trevor is a great character. Of course Heero would out-stubborn a cat. Too bad for me that I can't train Zippy (my 75 lb. black lab mix) as well as Heero could. Ah, well. I'm waiting for the rest of this story!

have the introder Silvia Novienta that one girl heero goes to for forgivness [or what ever]the one grandpa got killed by heero

Please continue!

No way she can cut the Braided Wonder's braid! It woudl be oh, i don't konw, DUo needs his braid. hehe okay, ideas, mmmmm, Trevor gets deliverd, and the intruders are all shoved out, mmm, the Gundams are needed 'casue there is a slight rebellion(okay ,MAJOR, Relina is kidnaped, everyone freeks, Quatre meets the rebels' leader(A girl their age, and CUTE to boot) and he ends up liking her, she sympathises with him and lets him go to fight her troops, ummmm, she ends up getting killed? NONono, they THINK she is dead. yeah, they think she died, and then they don't know who is heading the rebelion, and it ends up that Quatre swiched sideds and is heading it, and then RElina is relesed, Quatre and Trowa have a small fight, Quatre gets the $h!t kicked out of him, and oh if you ever run out of IDEAS... I've got more than my fair share.

Love the story, if you ever decide to stop posting, that e-bomb is from me. Oh, e-mail bombs arn't viruses, its an image that goes boom. you've been hit. and that's it, a little lame, but that's my threat. those arn't my only ideas. If you don't use them I will. I have more ideas if those ones are so crummy as all that... like, imagine, snowed in(the school!) before classes started, (the boys got there so early) And of course, there are a few teachers and a few girls...Everyone is summoned to a room, and told that they will be staying the night, and(all twenty three people) will have run of the school. Pretty mcuh, and they arn't to get in to anything, and it's kinda like a lock in? mmmm, they pull out computers(No blue screen of death, Heero can fix it, right.) And they work on their Gundams, find out that the school has a connection to a rebellion...okay, maybe nix the rebellion, make it a bomb has been planted to eliminate the Winner heir? Or to kill the piolets, ohoh, maybe one of the girls at the school(who is thier early) is something important, like a princess or sometihng of another place, or a president's daughter(completely under cover and secret) ohkay, your story, my ideas suck. later, e-mail me if you need more wacky plots,

Amara, Little Angel of Insanity

LOL, hehe FABULOUS! Keep up the great work girl, Hmmm *attempts thinkging of ideas* Owie... that hurt...*sniffle* Can't wait to find out what Hilde's got in store for Duo. *two thumbs way up* ;o) - Q-chan (as you and Sil insist. ;o)) ehhehe. /.' (Trowa) _-

hey, Tie Axi to the chair! *wants next chapter NOW*

I say that you should have Noin? (spelling? AHHH!) be the one to be the intruder,m just because she's not in this and she's a "fun" character. I would also like to comment that you don't abuse your "Author's Write" as some have called the all powerful ability to make the characters act out of character.

Some*glares at the evil Quatre haters* have made Quatre look like a total wimp. Or like a goodie goodie, and so far you have kept him cute. *Loves QUATRE And DUO* tje way you write, Shinigami rules! okay, sorry, I mean to tell you that your story rocks and that it has kept everyone IC and that I almost died with horror at the mention of MLA format. It's that scary. And that I LOVE your writing style, you make it so humerous.

Love the writing,

Brittany aka Amara aka Katlyna aka Minako aka Serenae

(actualy, my name is Morgan but these ones are the ones I go by!)