Reviews for Dobby's Deceit
RLJ chapter 21 . 6/24
This story is very well done and interesting. You have piled quite a lot on the shoulders of two young teenagers, especially Harry, and most teens wouldn't handle the pressure as well as he is in your story, especially as he can't spend time with Sirius and doesn't get to see Brady as much as he would like to. I really look forward to what is coming next. I hope Snivellus gets what's coming to him.
MadamBibliophile10 chapter 21 . 6/24
This is absolute brillance!
odhran.dunne172 chapter 1 . 6/20
This is such a good story. I really hope you come back to it some day
Fick Chick chapter 20 . 6/9
Speaking of Harry needing to turn his spells off, what about his patronized he keeps sending out to keep Sirious company?
Guest chapter 21 . 5/23
This is one of my favorite Harry Potter stories. I’ve been re-reading this for like the fifth time. I do hope you finish it someday. I like to imagine a happy ending where the goblins finish off Riddle and all the death eaters die and Sirius is found innocent.
slyhuff chapter 21 . 5/15
this is really heating up now, can't wait to read more
draconin chapter 21 . 5/13
This story is a recent discovery for me and I'm very impressed. Looking forward to any updates. :-)
Freddie Rindklip chapter 20 . 5/10
Too bad your muse went into hiding. It was a very enjoyable fic for how long it lasted.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 13 . 5/9
I am at the end of Chapter 13. From my reading Harry could invite 4 more to join in the lessons with the potions tutor. Am I right? Was it 3? From my reading he can still add 1 or 2.
Freddie Rindklip chapter 7 . 5/8
I am enjoying this re-read.
Tlyna52 chapter 21 . 5/6
You put a lot of work into this story but seem to have tossed it in the trash. Sad as it deserved better but I guess it is abandoned.
winniesm chapter 7 . 5/5
Didn't Harry mention that he knew about Neville's parents in the previous chapters with Brady? Why is he shocked now?
moonprincess97524 chapter 6 . 5/4
You are doing an excellent job in making Ron an ass (lots to work with). His comment of it's her word against yours about the marriage contracts is just wow. I do have to say that I am a little sad that the rat is dead as he could have been used to clear Padfoot. This is a wonderful wonderful story
TheGodsWeep chapter 21 . 3/11
Please tell me this isnt abandoned? Its an amazing story!
noylj chapter 21 . 3/6
Interesting, but dead, story
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