Reviews for Dobby's Deceit |
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Mad Library Scientist chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 Oh, this sounds like it’ll be a FUN story. I think I read in a different story where Gringotts allowed Harry to keep the skeleton of the Basikisk as a sort of battle trophy, and it’d be interesting to see if something similar happened here, maybe with just the skull. Looking forward to the next chapter! |
Angelique Collins chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 So far this was a great lengthy start. Looking forward to seeing where this goes. |
Home of the Brave chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 Great start. I like the role you're giving Dobby. Bodyguard/Butler/Caretaker/Teacher all in one. |
lmill123 chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 I really am enjoying this story with Dobby as a main character. I'm looking forward to the next update. Harry learning potions from the Giblins? Love it. Oh Shape will have a fit when he discovers Harry sold the Brazilian to the Goblins. I can just head him and Dumbledore trying to claim it belongs to Hogwarts. And wait till Dumbledore discovers Harry is now considered a FRIEND of th Goblin Nation. All of the old man's plans for Harry are quickly going down the drain. |
ctc1000 chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 Good story - nice use of the goblins -would like more color into how Harry is changing with elf magic and new regimen Look forward to next part |
Fast Frank chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 Very enjoyable read. Omake: "How was your summer, my boy?" "The Goblins used me for secret medical experiments. Best summer, ever!" |
Pietro99 chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 An excellent start and a brilliantly psychotic Dobby. Very well done. Looking forward to ch.2 |
Lizairy Cullen chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 omg i love it this history, i want the next chapter... dobby is the best elf... |
jkarr chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 this is a very interesting story |
plums chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 Excellent story. Definitely looking forward to more, Only thing that would make things better is if the Goblins convince Harry to contact the DMLE to drop the hammer on the Dursley’s. |
charlotte1217 chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 THIS IS SO GOOD. And so unique! I've not read anything like this. I love it! Thank you for sharing, I can't wait for more! 3 xxx |
Valentts chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 One thing for sure, our good author is a vegan, ha. |
Sakina chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 This is unique and I will definitely be keeping an eye on it! Good work so far! :) Can't wait to see the reaction of Dumbledore to this one! :D |
kent-jensen chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 more plz |
Go0gleplex chapter 1 . 1/19/2019 This was great. Definitely one of the better fanfics I've read lately. Looking forward to the next! |