Reviews for Dobby's Deceit |
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Freddie Rindklip chapter 20 . 5/10 Too bad your muse went into hiding. It was a very enjoyable fic for how long it lasted. |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 13 . 5/9 I am at the end of Chapter 13. From my reading Harry could invite 4 more to join in the lessons with the potions tutor. Am I right? Was it 3? From my reading he can still add 1 or 2. |
Freddie Rindklip chapter 7 . 5/8 I am enjoying this re-read. |
Tlyna52 chapter 21 . 5/6 You put a lot of work into this story but seem to have tossed it in the trash. Sad as it deserved better but I guess it is abandoned. |
winniesm chapter 7 . 5/5 Didn't Harry mention that he knew about Neville's parents in the previous chapters with Brady? Why is he shocked now? |
moonprincess97524 chapter 6 . 5/4 You are doing an excellent job in making Ron an ass (lots to work with). His comment of it's her word against yours about the marriage contracts is just wow. I do have to say that I am a little sad that the rat is dead as he could have been used to clear Padfoot. This is a wonderful wonderful story |
TheGodsWeep chapter 21 . 3/11 Please tell me this isnt abandoned? Its an amazing story! |
noylj chapter 21 . 3/6 Interesting, but dead, story |
noylj chapter 16 . 3/5 Inspecting wands missed. Taking memories missed. Incompetence every where |
noylj chapter 8 . 3/2 A pension is a monetary thing, not a hotel or spa. What is your definition of a pension? A place for pensioners to live, like a retirement home? |
clayva85 chapter 21 . 2/17 s |
jadesabrexiv chapter 21 . 2/11 Okay, let me get a little bitching out first: How in the name of all that is holy did you keep DOBBY from not Flaying the dungeon bat? That little bundle of condensed chaos adores the bushy haired genius, seeing her in pain…. Next question: Why do I have the feeling that Harry had to corral his own temper to keep himself from sending the bat to Venus? (That would be a very painful way to go….nothing sent there has lasted more than a few minutes.) Now, I’ve noticed your bit about moving to AO3 and will go there shortly to insure that I get the latest updates ( whenever you come back to this masterpiece), but please don’t make us wait too long. For some reason, the fate of Dumbassadoor looks to be something that will be very entertaining to read. (If you want to use my Venus idea, go ahead. Look up how long the Russian attempts lasted to get an idea of what I’m talking about here. Venus Satan’s nightmare fuel of a hot place to visit.) And another thing, Lavender and Parvati…for some reason I keep thinking that they will be surprise movers later on in this fic. Idk why, but that is what is echoing whenever they’re on screen. Thanks for the reading material and I look forward to seeing an update someday. JSX. |
jadesabrexiv chapter 16 . 2/11 Okay, first and foremost, I must apologize for not reading this fic as soon as it was suggested to me. Second, that section at the end in the Hospital Wing…..priceless. I can see the next issue of the student paper being up there as a WTUFFIGOT starter if nothing else. (What The Unholy Flying Fuck Is Going On There if you don’t know that one. FYI) ((I teach HS so I see it a lot in informal memos.)) Third, Malfoy continues his trend of demonstrating his complete devotion of not being a smart human being. For some reason I think his future of having clean laundry looks bleak. Fourth, the Weasley Family….for some reason the name Benedict Arnold keeps popping up every single time moRon or Ginny show up. Thanks you for making such an entertaining story and I look forward to seeing the rest of it. JSX. |
SunPho3n1x chapter 21 . 2/1 This is such an incredible story! I absolutely love the plotline, and I love all of the supportive connections that Harry has now. The snakelings are also absolutely adorable! Thank you very much for writing this! |
kirahunter chapter 21 . 1/26 I really like this story. Your plot line is great and so is your portrayal of the characters. You have created them with interesting, personality traits, and depth. I sincerely hope you do finish the story as it is well worth the read! I will be booked marking you and your stories for the future. Sincerely Kirahunter |