| Reviews for When You're Overdue on Rent, You Get Evicted |
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   Stormshadow13 chapter 7 . 6/7/2022 Awesome story! A very enjoyable read. Love the concept. I find it interesting how you wrote Lea and Axel – Two very different people so to speak. Like identical twins, but different personalities. If you ever get an idea for this to add on, it would be interesting to see the organization, and orIsa Saix reaction when this whole group shows up for the key blade battles. Lea and Axel, Roxas, Zion, and all the others. |
| LoreilDarksky00 chapter 7 . 7/30/2020 Stumbled onto this absolute gem and tbh your world building is fantastic. The whole thing about Dusks that were humans having human eyes, the process of Nobodies taking over the never-human Dusks, then growing hearts of their own, Aros... That mix of soft body horror and humor and everyone just rolling with it- *chef's kiss* |
| kurapikachu chapter 3 . 8/20/2019 I love FF9! Vivi is awesome! Zidane is awesome! This is awesome! |
| Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 7 . 3/16/2019 THANK YOU for the update! Did you update the Archive of our own version of this too? |
| Maya Chain 23 chapter 7 . 3/16/2019 Well that was one indigestion problem. Also OUCH that back straightening sounds painful indeed. |
| princesseru10 chapter 7 . 3/16/2019 This chapter was such a nice unexpected surprise! Like I thought I was going crazy at first when I got the notification. But this chapter was really fun to read, especially your characterization of Aros! And it was nice seeing the aftermath of the previous chapters. I liked how you added the (not so) dream-like part with everyone in Sora's heart. Especially with Lea being so excited about the unexpected advantage |
| CHEESEPUFF fg chapter 7 . 3/16/2019 I LOVED EVERY SECOND OF IT Aros is ADORABLE! But that last line? I kinda wanna see that now XD So if you ever do another bonus chapter,can it include that please? Only if you do another chapter |
| FusionCore chapter 7 . 3/15/2019 God that was intense! So well written, it's crazy! You showed so much in this chapter... Roxas and Axel Humanisation, that seemingly permanent connection between Sora and his heart inhabitants and now Aros i love how feral you made him, he is real savage kind of what hollows from bleach used to be like, i am just sure you wrote part of his behavior from them. You clearly got a lot of skills as a writer. Overall this fanfic is Amazing so far! |
| actress4him chapter 7 . 3/15/2019 Aw, yay! This story is so fun, I’m glad we got another chapter! |
| PheonixQueen15 chapter 7 . 3/15/2019 I love this bonus chapter! I would love to read more. |
| Wenchang Wang chapter 6 . 2/21/2019 I really enjoyed this. Good job! |
| Guest chapter 6 . 2/17/2019 Love the story. Read everything in one go. |
| CHEESEPUFF fg chapter 6 . 2/16/2019 this was amazing and adorable one of my favourite Kingdom Hearts stories that are written in the way I prefer (e.g. the male inhabitants of Sora's heart having a brotherly relationship rather than a romantic relationship ect.) and it was a really sweet ending. i loved it |
| Minecraft Guardiansaiyan chapter 6 . 2/10/2019 Telepathically connected...when the all have a sleeve in the same bed all of them hang out for after hours swim and ice cream eating... |
| princesseru10 chapter 6 . 2/9/2019 This chapter was definitely not what I expected coming into it; I guess I expected more of Xion's experience and some Sora comforting, but not what ended up happening. Not that I'm complaining, I actually really loved and enjoyed the whole thing. It was actually nice how it wasn't what I expected. I also esp liked reading how Lea and Axel were able to help Sora! The only thing I don't like is how sad I am that this fic is over it was such an enjoyable read! Also sidenote, I died from laughter when Ienzo asked if Lea was taking notes that part was such a nice addition! |