|Reviews for What of the Marauders?|
| RissaMalfoy chapter 22 . 10/30/2004
I Love your story!
| Beansie chapter 22 . 7/29/2004
Ha, update soon
| Beansie chapter 21 . 7/15/2004
Me again, read the part at the top, yes, that does make sense, but i still think in they're second year...
Very nice chapter, very nice, i like the way you gave Peter his nickname, like i said in my earlier review, your story is extremmilly? interesting and i hope you update soon! this is one of the best hp/maruader stories i've read!
| kat chapter 9 . 7/8/2004
i really like your story so far, but i just thought i'd mention (though i'm sure some observant person already has) that the Romulus was not made by that "seeing grey" chick at all. it comes actually from the Roman myth of Romulus and Remus who were abandoned in a forest to die. they were found by a she-wolf and brought up in pack of wolves she belonged to. They were eventually found by a shepard and as they grew to know the human tongues, they decided to build a city. they got in a argument over who would name the city. Romulus killed Remus and thus the city Romulus built was named Rome after him.
There's a bit of foreshadowing for ya, lol.
anyway, great story, keep being creative and all.
(its too bad Remus had to die, but "Reme" would have sounded weird anyway. Go Rome.
| Beansie chapter 20 . 6/26/2004
i'm sorry, but there is one thing in your fic i must point out as incorrect:in the 3rd book, lupin says that they did eventually work out the truth, and that they worked on becoming animagis for 3 years, finally making the accomplishment in their 5th year. so wouldn't that mean they find out remus is a werewolf in their 2nd year? just something i wanted to clarify.
beside that subject, you story is VERY interesting an entertaining. please update your fic soon!
| read247 chapter 19 . 6/5/2004
wow! this is GREAT!
1. did you notice that you spelled "luscious" malfoy. (even tho he is so very cute- and evil of course)
2. um... that's all i can remember...
so, great job! i was so lugubrious when i saw there were no more chapters, so, please, write on! :)
| Banksie chapter 17 . 9/2/2003
the story is very good please keep writing!
| Kitsune Swift chapter 17 . 8/4/2003
your story is really funny, though i would add a few more pranks. after all, they are the marauders. anyway, update soon!
| kantomon chapter 17 . 7/5/2003
What a great story line! This is a nice Marauder fic, please update a lot!
| lil-sweeti011 chapter 14 . 6/14/2003
ur still doing a fantastic job!~
| RedRaspberry chapter 12 . 6/5/2003
This is such a cute story! I hope you continue and go all the way through their 7 years! Peaty Pie! Oh wow, that was funny! Please continue soon!
| lil-sweeti011 chapter 12 . 6/3/2003
yay~second year! keep up the good work.
| Guin chapter 10 . 5/31/2003
It'd be fun seeing how the learn to do it, but it's really up to you. If you do cary on, well this is a really great fic anyway!
| RedRaspberry chapter 9 . 5/26/2003
Oh, that is such a cute story! It's sad how Remus'brother died, though. Please continue it soon!
| Guin chapter 9 . 5/25/2003
A few notes-
They say Merry Christmas in the book because that is more commonly used in Britain, but they say Happy Christmas in the film (I susupect) to appeal to American audiences or because an American wrote the script. Seeing as Hogwarts is in England, I would keep it as it is.
Remus's brother is called Romulus for one main reason other than the seeing grey fic, and I think this is why she called his brother that. In the myth of the founding of Rome twin princes were abandoned in the woods to die (don't ask why, long story). They were brought up by a she-wolf and were eventually found by some Shepards. They decided to build a city, whilst doing so they had an arguement and Romulus kiled Remus. Romulus went on to build Rome, naming it after himself.
A little bit of theology there! I hope you find that useful, and keep on writing!