|Reviews for What of the Marauders?|
| Guin chapter 9 . 5/25/2003
A few notes-
They say Merry Christmas in the book because that is more commonly used in Britain, but they say Happy Christmas in the film (I susupect) to appeal to American audiences or because an American wrote the script. Seeing as Hogwarts is in England, I would keep it as it is.
Remus's brother is called Romulus for one main reason other than the seeing grey fic, and I think this is why she called his brother that. In the myth of the founding of Rome twin princes were abandoned in the woods to die (don't ask why, long story). They were brought up by a she-wolf and were eventually found by some Shepards. They decided to build a city, whilst doing so they had an arguement and Romulus kiled Remus. Romulus went on to build Rome, naming it after himself.
A little bit of theology there! I hope you find that useful, and keep on writing!
| lil-sweeti011 chapter 8 . 5/24/2003
great story...storyline...ideas...etc...plz continue..
| lil-sweeti011 chapter 5 . 5/24/2003
| The Dark Elfy Chick chapter 7 . 5/19/2003
That's pretty good! Gotta say that you could've proof-read it a little better, but all in all, it's pretty good!
| Cynical-Sweetheart chapter 7 . 5/19/2003
Great fanfic! i liked it...and even though you had a lil' bit of gramatical mistakes...it was still okies! keep me posted friend!
| Guin chapter 5 . 5/17/2003
Really good, but would like to see more of Remus, because he'smy FAV character.
| Lyby chapter 4 . 5/3/2003
I likes very much your fic, I think she's great! (she is) I think the characters are like I imagine them...
Er, I want to ask you a question, can I translate your fic into french? Because I'm a french girl, and I think your story can pleased people (sorry for the bad expression). I'll say the fic is yours, and how I am a modest translater... If you want to ask me questions, or everything, you can contact me at :
Bye, hope to have news of you!
| Abigail-Nicole chapter 1 . 5/2/2003
This chapter was a little boring but I enjoy writing about things from unusual perspectives, and plus this is a hard scene to write about.
Is the "Meet Remus" thing from the "Meet_" from American Girl books?
Just a thought, you know...
| Guin chapter 2 . 4/27/2003
A great chapter! Noticed the subtle difference in the 1st one to, glad that i could be of any help. Carry on writning and update soon!
| Guin chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
The sorting hat scene was a tad reminescent of the one in Harry Potter (You could possibly ahve tryed to cahnge the foramt more, rather than keeping it so close to the oringinal) but it is your choice and I reckon that this fic has tons of potential! Wow, this is one of my most sensible reviews i've ever given! I'm going sane. This is a bad sighn.
| Scooterbug8515 chapter 1 . 4/24/2003
Ok, I'm just putting a review in to just try and get things rolling. I realy like this fanfic and I realy think this is worth a read! If you don't like it yet, I promise that it'll get better.