Reviews for Living
Yemi Hikari chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
The story started off well, but then it started to fill as if the story was just meandering rather then getting to the point.
Duesal Bladesinger chapter 1 . 11/11/2014

It's cool to read someone's speculations of that fight before it ever aired.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
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anime-novel-lover chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
good job on this story!
DerelictHeart chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
That was really cute. it seems really well thought out and planned, and it all came together in the end.

it was a nice one-shot and probably could be easily extended into a full fledged story.

but in the end, it was amazing.
Krisymkk chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
You shouldn't've stopped writting. I think you should add to it and repost.
KrystalB2003 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Fantastic one-shot! A very interesting take on the end of Itachi...
MonkeysTotallyRock chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
kenhime! it is i, monkeyboy! nah, it's me from H&E (if you still remember.) they were saying you were a good author, and so i had to find out for myself. well, i must say i agree. i'm very competitive (although you have to have some skill to be competitive... and i don't. '' i guess i'm kinda like naruto. '') anyways, i love the commentary on itachi. i'm an itachi fan myself, and i just love him for the character. he's mysterious. still there's something about him... he's obviously not telling all he knows. anyways, if you want a really cool theory thread about the uchihas (the first one that COMPLETELY makes sense,) go to this web site. read all of it; helps more. the beginning is a little rough around the endges, but it's good. the author did nice research. forums.
Annie Sparklecakes chapter 1 . 6/11/2006

That was just PERFECT! The Itachi thing was sad, and the stor felt like it jumped around a bit, but still...


*squeals again*
LeadYouIn chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
So adorable! I love it!
ars nova chapter 1 . 5/25/2006

really really good
leeyiankun chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Well, you got that right enough...

this is a depiction from the earlier volumes indeed.

Too bad it got shot to hell with

the events of Sasuke Chidori'ed Naruto's lungs.

Even a saint would have a hard time forgiving after that one.

Sakura's characterization is spot on though. Her love is almost as blind as Naruto's .

But since you had them work as a team against Itachi..

I'm surprise there's no summon in this. Really?

Where did Gamabuta go?

I could understand Naruto not using him against Sasuke. He wanted to bring the little a$$ back, not squish him. Like Gamabunta would have done. But against Itachi? hm..
Crimson-Eyed-Angel99 chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
*glomps* Nice work... such incharacterness! _ And Sasuke-centric is lovely... *grins*

*sniffles* I wish Itachi didn't have to die... even if he is twisted and disturbing, I wish he didn't have to die...
shwainze chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
i love this fanfic!

it's so cute and original and cool and realistic and...(excuse me as i rant on...) get the picture.

you're such a good writer and i wish that someday i can write like you.

actually it was my sister's friend who recommended this story to me i read it and i immediately fell in love with it!

okay...enough about that... will sasuke 'resurrect' his clan soon?

i remain,

~velvet ink~
tenshi-monogatari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
your story is so cute!i'm so sorry but i'm in a hurry...
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