|Reviews for Living|
| anime-novel-lover chapter 1 . 7/11/2011
good job on this story!
| SilverLockhart chapter 1 . 2/1/2008
That was really cute. it seems really well thought out and planned, and it all came together in the end.
it was a nice one-shot and probably could be easily extended into a full fledged story.
but in the end, it was amazing.
| Krisymkk chapter 1 . 6/21/2007
You shouldn't've stopped writting. I think you should add to it and repost.
| KrystalB2003 chapter 1 . 1/5/2007
Fantastic one-shot! A very interesting take on the end of Itachi...
| MonkeysTotallyRock chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
kenhime! it is i, monkeyboy! nah, it's me from H&E (if you still remember.) they were saying you were a good author, and so i had to find out for myself. well, i must say i agree. i'm very competitive (although you have to have some skill to be competitive... and i don't. '' i guess i'm kinda like naruto. '') anyways, i love the commentary on itachi. i'm an itachi fan myself, and i just love him for the character. he's mysterious. still there's something about him... he's obviously not telling all he knows. anyways, if you want a really cool theory thread about the uchihas (the first one that COMPLETELY makes sense,) go to this web site. read all of it; helps more. the beginning is a little rough around the endges, but it's good. the author did nice research. forums.
| Annie Sparklecakes chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
That was just PERFECT! The Itachi thing was sad, and the stor felt like it jumped around a bit, but still...
HE WAS BLUSHING!
| LeadYouIn chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
So adorable! I love it!
| ars nova chapter 1 . 5/25/2006
really really good
| leeyiankun chapter 1 . 1/6/2006
Well, you got that right enough...
this is a depiction from the earlier volumes indeed.
Too bad it got shot to hell with
the events of Sasuke Chidori'ed Naruto's lungs.
Even a saint would have a hard time forgiving after that one.
Sakura's characterization is spot on though. Her love is almost as blind as Naruto's .
But since you had them work as a team against Itachi..
I'm surprise there's no summon in this. Really?
Where did Gamabuta go?
I could understand Naruto not using him against Sasuke. He wanted to bring the little a$$ back, not squish him. Like Gamabunta would have done. But against Itachi? hm..
| Crimson-Eyed-Angel99 chapter 1 . 12/18/2004
*glomps* Nice work... such incharacterness! _ And Sasuke-centric is lovely... *grins*
*sniffles* I wish Itachi didn't have to die... even if he is twisted and disturbing, I wish he didn't have to die...
| shwainze chapter 1 . 8/30/2004
i love this fanfic!
it's so cute and original and cool and realistic and...(excuse me as i rant on...)
well...you get the picture.
you're such a good writer and i wish that someday i can write like you.
actually it was my sister's friend who recommended this story to me i read it and i immediately fell in love with it!
okay...enough about that...
um...so will sasuke 'resurrect' his clan soon?
| tenshi-monogatari chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
your story is so cute!i'm so sorry but i'm in a hurry...
| Lady Misao chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Ek i loved this ;D. i think you got out Itachi really well. I dont think i could do so good ;
nice job! I loved it. ..ah SakuraXSasukeXNaruto friendship.
and some hints of Sasusaku! YAY ;D
| Gisela chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Well...I don't like Sakura with Sasuke only because I don't see her growing with him around. It's like she'd be stuck in this limbo or something. She'll probably end up with someone, but I'd rather have her with a round character that will allow all her positive attributes to grow. You know she was so much better in the later series than the earlier ones. She became rather cool even though she was weak in comparison to the other fighters. But anyway, despite my dislike of this pairing and despite the fact you story oozed with mushy Sakura and Sasukeness, I still really liked it. I didn't like the pairing at all, but I just couldn't stop reading your story. After that...I might even read Sakura/Sasuke stories. How'd you do that? Oh whatever I'm not going to question your writing abilities that, might I say, manipulates your reader into liking whatever you want them to. LOL. Anyway great story. Very well written. The people are in character. The plot a little odd(because of the newer info given in the original about Itachi and the chidori)But the character interpretation was just beautiful. Thanks for writing it. I enjoyed reading -
| xXFissshBonesssXx chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
They're not gonna walk off into a sunset or anything like that?
cool. at least it wasn't too gooey. :) :p later. I gotta log off now-graduating tomorrow ... beauty sleep ...
(of course, it doesn't help much)
I like it when everyone can kick back and laugh at a blushing Sasuke. It's peaceful.