|Reviews for The In-Between|
| onerandomanime chapter 12 . 1/2
hi i literally got reminded of this fic in one of my old google docs for good fics that ive read and i literally just re-read this whole thing because i absolutely adore it after all these years lol
I am still dying from this cliffhanger you've left even now! usually when I go to look at old fics ive read and thought were amazing, I go back to realize how... subpar they were. But your fic is the OPPOSITE of that. you're so concise and well spoken and I lover your narrative voice.
I hope you and your family are doing well after all these years :)) the little kids are probably not as little as they used to be, huh ;D I hope your husbands company is doing well!
I really hope you know this fic is so well loved, both by me, and many others as well. this still reigns as one of the best mha fics ive read, and it hasnt even hit a climax yet.
If you think that theres no point in finishing this because its been too long- you're totally wrong, and this review better be evidence :0
anyways i really hope you don't forget about this fact, but if you do thats okay too- things change, but know that you've got readers rooting for you if you look! Please keep writing no matter what- even if it's not this fic!
| busty-cutie chapter 12 . 5/23/2022
been a year since your last author note on here so first hope you're still doing ok (surely some authors worry me when they say about their current situation like srsly its ok if you have not updated just stay safe and healthy).
second, ye I can get family life being hectic (not a mum but liv w fam w little children). and damn take it easy, pregnancy and kids are not easy.
third, looooooooove your story, like I haven't really stopped reading cos its getting boring or rushed or cringet or anything like that, like everything just kept my attention. also a good representation of the relationship bw izuku and katsuki. also interesting take that katsuki bullying was some part just joking while also wanting izuku to retaliate. and that izuku been mindful that not everyone wants be his friend and has his own flaws. also i wouldn't have thought the psp would be how izuku contacts katsuko, I akways thought he'd test the in between perception to like pick a pen up and write a note. I also wonder would police and pros lookout near food places cos the villains need to eat, but then toga can change appearance with it being unclear how many people's blood she has, it wouldn't work (I thought online shopping but that might risk personal info leaking out; tho they could also just got from other villains). I at least hope they can track izuku's location from the text. but I think the villains would find out and punish him or get the quirk to make him act villainous.
small critism is the use of eff of effing but still using other swears? I mean the f-word just sounds a lot sharper than eff/effing and more like katsuki. also katsuki deaf would be one to think feelings are weak, Ida if he'd consider them girly, just cos he doesn't seem to really care about that kind of stuff but then again maybe it's a manga/anime thing or given his bullying, sound plausible bully language (like those middle school bullies who say go keys props the same girly as an insult).
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/31/2022
So. Any chance you could update this story sometime soon? Or has something happened? Hope you're okay.
The story was good, I'd still like to read the rest. But if you're not interested in writing it anymore, I guess that's understandable after all this time and all the recent changes in your life. Just letting you know that I still haven't forgotten about your story. It's been quiet here for a while, so I thought one more comment couldn't hurt.
| onerandomanimefangirl chapter 10 . 11/14/2021
Was digging through - i have grown old now and am an ao3 dweller- and i noted this fic in my faves and had to come back to tell you how much i love this shit! if you EVER are willing to come back to writing i would simply curl up and die i miss this fic so much. one of the memorable ones from the dark days!
I hope you still continue writing regardless, whether its this fic, on writing anything, or writing in general, and I am excited and waiting for the day if you ever come back! Would def scream when i got the email update. After all these years (and only shit, covid as a whole) I really hope you're doing well!
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/26/2021
Hi Bryler. I just wanted to let you know that I haven't given up on this story. I don't think I ever had so much patience for slow updating stories before. There's just something about this one that makes me unwilling to let go. I really want to know what happens next. And believe me, I know little kids are no joke. I can imagine that with 3 of them you're probably busy as heck. But since writing is your hobby, IMO you should at least try to get back to it in your free time, just so you can relax and have fun the way you like it. Hope you and your family are all safe and healthy, and that eventually you will write the rest of this fic. Take care.
| Eloise Carcini chapter 12 . 6/25/2021
Hey Bryler, I hope you've been doing well and have had a nice summer break so far or any break at all and that life hasn't been too difficult with 3 children. I hope they haven't given you too many headaches(I'm just a 155 year old girl, but my younger brothers make me swear to not have kids when I grow up) and that you and your family are all healthy. I see you've updated this other story on May 18th, but not this one...Please do write more chapters for this story when you have the time. Please do return soon, author! Even if you don't have a chapter please give us an update about how things are going for you and please give us an estimated time of when you'll , I really don't want this great story to end unfinished like this so I hope you do return.
| Eloise Carcini chapter 12 . 6/12/2021
This is an incredible story and although you have a hectic life I hope you you find the time and motivation to continue writing this story. I hope you return soon and add another chapter, Bryler!
| Dazzle3B chapter 12 . 5/15/2021
This story has absolutely punched me with everything I love about a fic. Incredible writing, perfect pacing, characterisation just on point of each and every character, no exaggeration of anything again the chapters and even the titles give me the same vibes as the show! Beautiful, absolutely amazing! And the way you handle Bakugo's and Deku's interactions is just one of the best ones I've ever seen. Seriously, I hope you're doing well in this crazy world of ours and I also want to thank you this wonderful (angsty as hell) fic cause I've been binge-reading it as a way to distress from school exams and it's been an interesting and possibly one of my top favourite fic journey!
You have no idea how many times I had to put my phone down, inhale a chunk of air, and prepare my brain for the next paragraphs caus there are so many scenes that I want to draw (I actually screenshot them since you can't download fics on this site) and hOLY MOLY MY POOR CINNAMON ROLL AND ANGRY GREMLIN THEY JUST NEED HUGS1000
Again absolutely Kudos for writing such a masterpiece cause woO this is fic got me speechless and sobbing internally multiple times!
| Rose chapter 12 . 5/7/2021
I really love this. Is it okay if you write more?
| Tradition of War chapter 12 . 4/1/2021
Can't wait for the next chapter... this fic gives me life!
| Eureka Star chapter 12 . 3/8/2021
Excellent update! And, glad to see you doing well as one can during these times!
| Eloise Carcini chapter 12 . 2/6/2021
Thank you for the update and please do continue this enthralling story!
| Cozy Cove chapter 4 . 12/10/2020
I cannot find the " shit " and reading it all over is something I've only done for my first ever Beyblade fanfiction and one by Timmesque, called " Begging For You ".
Wait is this advetising? Sorry! I tend to amble so
I won't waste you time with my non working email, here's my woking one : .
I want to explain the " ARMY " parts but, time to wap things up, right? Shizz my keyboard sucks, missing ' w ''s and ' r ''s all the time.
Great story, btw.
Email me? Don't have to, can basically get mad at me too, just asking. I have a lot to ramble lol, unfortunately not attached to fanfiction, or BNHA / MHA. Okay maybe anime and manga but not fanfiction? uhh
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/6/2020
Thank goodness, you're okay! Thank you for letting us know. I guess this year has been so awful everyone is just assuming the worst case scenarios, lol. Congratulations on your baby girl, btw. It isn't hard to understand your lack of time for your hobbies lately. Still, great to know that soon you'll be writing again, I'm pretty darn excited for the next chapter :D
| LonniWrites chapter 12 . 10/29/2020
Cannot wait for the next chapter, it’s finally a story about Midoriya and Bakugou and their relationship in a non-romantic way and I can’t get enough. Hope you’re doing well, good luck on the next chapter!