Reviews for The In-Between |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well. If the story is named "The In-Between" and the chapter is named "The In-Between" then one can only assume that it's going to be amazing. And what can I say...AMAZING. This was absolutely brilliant. The league finally coming up with seemingly foolproof plans, the way you captured Izuku's essence, the whole experience! I don't particularly have anything to say about the "In-Between" but I can say I'm enjoying it. As for that bet? Only a really stupid person would take that, that's a dead bet! And boy am I gonna love that when it come. So, so, OH so much. Thanks for giving us this glorious piece of work, especially this time of the year. AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() Love the creative liberties. If Kurogiri can warp, why wouldn't there be an alternative universe! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read the first chapter, and I love your writing and characterization, it's really good. I can hardly find any bromance story in this fandom, at my great despair. Please, please keep going, because I KNOW it'll be a beautiful, and amazing fic. I'm hooked! (I can't wait for the angst either |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, update! I actually stopped messing with the laundry just to sit down and read this. xD Angsty Bakugou is kinda cute, though. Saddening, but adorable. I seriously cannot wait to see what happens next. Do keep up the good work. And you better enjoy the nice weather with your kiddos while you can! Until next time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the notes. Kinda missed a couple of them until you pointed them out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing! This story just keeps getting more and more engaging. I love watching Bakugo's development unfold, and how he deals with his emotions and thoughts. Seeing him finally confront his feelings was honestly eye-opening. I never considered that he might be jealous of Izuku and admire him. I always assumed he just thought Izuku was looking down on him. And while that may be part of it, it doesn't account for the severity of his treatment towards Izuku. I think your explanation is more plausible as the root for their relationship than a simple case of hurt pride on Bakugo's part. I'm so glad you updated! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Another brilliant chapter. I read it almost as soon as it got uploaded but being in a hospital means no network for me. So ... I AM HERE WITH AN UNTIMELY REVIEW OF THIS PASSAGE! XD XD. Jokes aside this was bloody fantastic. The angst, the material, the immersion. Everything. Thoroughly enjoyable. Although, the reaction when he came into UA was a little ... I dunno... suppressed? Maybe because the initial shock wore off? Or for his sake? I'm not sure but the expected blowup never came. I'm assuming certain people are going to be saying "fuck it" to the rules sooner rather than later. The whole AM passage was on point. I do have a question though. Will we see any Deku POV from here on out or is it completely gonna be Katsuki till we find him? It's getting late so I might be spewing rubbish, so before I do that, let me finish this. Great chapter, thanks so much! P.S. Hell yeah! Spring time with the family? Absolute dream. Have a good one! |
![]() ![]() Oh man, I'm so happy you updated! Great to know you're alright. And that you haven't abandoned the story. But I do understand, family comes first, it's all cool Anyway, my everyday checking for updates finally payed off. Great timing, too. You made my otherwise sh***y day better. The chapter itself was far from happy, though. As much as I'm dying to know what's happening with Izuku, it's always good to hear from Katsuki as well. And you're absolutely right: a chapter like this was really necessary for this fanfic since it's mostly a character study. It was really touching to see other 1A class students, Mr. and Mrs. Bakugō and All Might show how much they care. Not to mention it was both sad and satisfying to see Katsuki himself realize all those things about his and Deku's relationship. I liked the part about Bakugō convincing himself to delete all curse words from his essay. I didn't know if I should feel more amused or sympathetic for his state of mind. In any case, it made me laugh a bit. Can't wait for the next chapter.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was sad. Super sad. Great job at keeping Bakugou in character. Also, the hiatus is all good. Don't let anyone give you a problem over it. I hope you had fun with your family :D That much angst? Welp. Kudos. God bless. -Silver . |
![]() ![]() Dear Bryler, I know it's not exactly a review but I have no other way to leave you a message. While I believe your story doesn't get as much love as it deserves (seriously, it should have hundreds of reviews by now), it does have its loyal readers. They have been waiting for the next chapter for quite a while. And as one of them, a huge fan, I'm worried that: a) something happened to you that prevented you from writing (in that case I hope you're okay, just busy or something, but if you aren't, then I hope you will get better soon...) b) you've lost interest in this story and plan on discontinuing it (should that be the case, please post a note about it here) Either way, I want you to know that for what it's worth I love this story enough to check it for updates daily. And yes, I'll be very disappointed if you actually discontinue it, but hey, c'est la vie. I just want to know if that's the case and probably so do your other fans. For now, I'm still not losing hope, waiting for the continuation. Take care! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, I found this story the other day and just finished up to this point. I NEED to know what happens next. Keep up the great work! I'll be looking forward to the next chapter~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please...PLEASE finish this masterpiece! I am floored by how well written and executed this story is. Don’t let this collect dust. Honestly, don’t I feel that every amazing story on this platform is unfinished... and I couldn’t bear to see this one end the same as everyone else’s! This is one of the BEST fanfics I have ever read, and every chapter leaves me literally shaking from adrenaline that I have no way to release. The characterization is flawless; furthermore, the fine detail you put into capturing the emotions of a scene truly transport the reader into the world. I’m on the edge of my metaphorical seat. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bruh BRUH. THIS SHIT IS GIVING ME LIFE. Seriously, this is amazing. Their characterizations are perfect! This is just fucking amazing. I'm like legitimately more hyped for this than the actual show, I think. I love exploring Izuku and Kacchan's extremely complicated not-friendship. I like the parallel you made to siblings, because I think they are like estranged brothers in a lot of ways. Your story has great pacing, and I like how you involve the other characters in a way that makes it always tie back into the focus of the story. You're really a talented writer! I especially loved how during the concussion incident, Bakugo just kept thinking "I didn't hit him that hard." over and over again. It's such a simple line, but it conveys so much! I love how you described the fear he feels when he realizes something really bad has happened to Izuku after they go home for the weekend. Your depictions of emotions are spot-on, and very vivid! I can't wait to see how this turns out! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bakugou has dumb bitch disease confirmed. Alsososo this chapter has me literally screaming on the edge of my seat. I can’t wait for that character development, and I’m such a bitch for angst. I want there to be tears, drama, pain but I also love my boys so much they deserve no pain. I’m shook for the next chapter I don’t know how I feel about the soon to come date of deku, as next chapter is his chapter, but alas, I absolutely love your writing and am quaking over my poor boyos. I love the way you had the whole thing happen. I love trap actually being a trap story points. Also, concerned Baku? Hmm not letting him see sounds like concern.. hope to see the next chapter soon. (I literally screamed when I didn’t see the next chapter buttonnnn) |
![]() ![]() ![]() When you think about it, bakugou always talks about how he’s tired of Midoriya throwing all the ‘fuck yous’ at his face, yet in a way he is doing it to Midoriya too. I love the dynamic and I really feel it when Midoriya is jealous of how easily bakugou accepts kirishima. Midoriya is super tenacious too - I’d probably give up on trying to be friends with bakugou if I were him |