ARRRRRGGGGHHHHH Where is Chp 14? You must update!

I love how Christine just takes charge here. You've portrayed Erik's reactions very well. I am dying to know what happens next!

~R

Oh, I love this. Seeing them both older and wiser is making my night.

Meg is doing a good job of delaying, and dang it, I knew Raoul was going to wade that lake. Argh!

On to 13...

~R

OK, it did NOT suck, what are you thinking?

That line, where you said Erik felt what he hoped would only be a once in a lifetime sensation - that of his heart snapping neatly in two - is so well done that I had to read it multiple times. Gah, i wish I'd written that.

I'm having another "wanting to smack Christine" moment here at the end. On to Chp 12 to see if she'll come to her senses.

~R

Please, update soon. I understand you might be having trouble with it, but at least TRY to update.

Good Lord. I almost thought the bot was malfunctioning when the author alert arrived in my inbox! - but what a pleasant surprise.

Loving Raoul (I especially like the reflections on the parallels between the scarf and his present situation!) and ah, well, you knew I couldn't fail to like the rest of it. But to end there! - just cruel ...

Welcome back, my dear :)

I just found your haunting story. It's refreshing to see these characters behave like adults (well, we'll see about Raoul!). Please don't disappear again!

Excuse me? YOu delayed to continue this by at least a YEAR! I demand the rest of the story be posted as soon as possible, or an ultimate disaster shall befall upon you!

Oh my, please **please** continue! I can't wait for the next chapter! Your story is incredible, and very well written.

Please continue, and I like Aeysha. Cats are like that, I have two of my own. I'm glad she finally realized that she still loves him.

YES! I knew you'd update eventually. It was as brilliant as always and I heartily thank you. Please do post more soon!

Just read your story for the first time today - and I absolutely love it - I just love the way you have written Erik (I am hopelessly besotted with Erik) - and really look forward to your next chapter.

Great story! I loved it from the very first sentence. When I read the first chapter, I told myself, "This is definitely going to be a good story." And it is, so far! Please update soon!

This is amazing! Don't let Raoul turn up and spiol things again though...please? Horray for Erik! Very very well written.

Wow, I just caught up on the whole story and it's wonderful, please PLEASE update!

You have to finish this story. U are a good author and I really hope you will continue this lovely story. Maybe u could teach me how to write such perfectly sweet stories. I really love it, u know. Do continue it! U rule!

great writing i all of the chapters,but this one sucked-why did she have to go-if i was writing the story i would have her leave then erik would run out after her into the daylight...