With my previous statement I love how you treated the king here. He's detestable but you at least understand his pain. But more than anything I like how you redeemed him. It was very painful for him to ackowledge his fault and his crimes. Over the course of a few chapters we saw his change, and it doesnt change his sins, but it does mean he can make up for it and face his guilt.
This was excellent and an actual way to deal with such characters without adding some happiness filter like witht he previous 2 examples (also the spear hero spinoff was kinda weird. It tried to redeem him but also showed how he didn't really repent but changed his actions due to circumstances. His still a lustful maniac who really hasn't learned his lesson.). No offense, but that stuff almost sounds like parcasious, the fsn fanfic writer like fate in time. Not bad plot but really butchers the characters and forgets complexity

You should have gone the game of thrones route and extrapolate more on Naofumi's 'majestic cock'. Truly something worthy of a hero ;)
I'm really enjoying your writing. Its rather good with some very fun plot developments. Im not too fond of how you try to redeem some characters like Motayasu or Danzo while completely disregarding other characters like itsuki or (very contentious) Gokudera. Its just weirdly jarring how you try to justify or ignore some of their actions (like Danzo causing the uchiha ostracization which made them feel discriminated and thus rebellion. They were the victims) and are overly critical of others (i dont like gokudera, but at least feel like I should defend the guy.). Its almost like the exageration of evil greater good dumbeldore. Although HP fanfics kinda ruined the reputation of fanfics.

you decide to drop this when things are getting good how disappointing

The sword ate 750 tons.

So is Fohl not a character or what? All that hard work, blood and tears to keep his sister alive, and he’s just forgotten and treated like a one dimensional character. Rip my boy.

Great story but uh, damn. That’s just bad.

This is Amusing. Keel the Boy-looking Girl and Midori the Girl-looking Boy is in Naofumi's Party.

KeelI might be a Girl but add Kun on my Name Damnit!"
MidoriI moght be a Boy but add Chan on my Name Please!"
NaofumiI'm Trap with Traps... The world is way Too Cruel to me... It is at least Amusing to see Motayasu's Face at finding out Keel is a Girl and Midori is a Boy, especially the Latter part."

Lmaoo that's a good punishment for itsuki if nothing else works

nah this is where I bail out

Hate tropes like these where mc have to carry other important characters especially mc, n not do their own thing.

Man, spelling dyslexia as a dyslexic person is just hellish. That's a personalised hell if I've ever seen one

[-UnGodly] letting go of reading this, do not follow nor agree with your fic penname I believe there is no other "god" than the one mentioned within the Holy Bible the God who created the heavens and the earth and all that is upon between and the beneath, as the Father and had been inhabiting the Son as well as that His very Living Spirit. I do not participate in franchising or endorsing phrasing mention within this story as well as the phrase I mentioned the last later chaptered comment. []

I mean...that's the whole point of shield hero. this isn't a game. no matter how much it resembles one. so breaking it is kind of the point.

the actual endgoal is for the heroes to become borderline gods. again. not actual gods. the legendary weapons are the only actual gods.

because they are actually concepts. a mortal cannot become a god. unless they steal the domain of an already existing god.

since actual gods are conceptual beings. they rule over a domain. a concept in the world. like the god of thunder. or the god of hounds. or the god of wine. so on and so forth.

the goddes of swords jien. lol. because she is the very concept of what a sword is. the same as the other legendary weapons.

i love that manga. never saw the anime. luckily for jian. she can't get stuck like shishou lol.

I kind of guessed as much. damn. that means a John Wick crossover would never work in this universe.

He'd get shocked from picking up anything. he'd have to find a way to get everything from his legendary weapon.

hell. he wouldn't even be able to eat certain foods because of it.

also. nails in a medieval setting would have been worth a pretty penny. so he should definitely steal the nails too lol.

they used to just burn old houses down, so they can collect all the valuable nails.

Dammit why did he have to abandon this?

fitoria is not a goddess. that's like. the whole overarching plot of the series.

medeia the self proclaimed goddess. basically. none of them are actual deities. the closest is the legendary weapons themselves.

medeia, fitoria, naofumi, raphtalia, and ark. all are just incredibly powerful immortals. they're just to the point where a mortal can't tell the difference.

naofumi talked about how all of medeia's claims about being all powerful and infinite was just her being full of shit. she's just some evil bitch from an ancient civilization that gained a lot of power.

gods and goddesses are conceptual beings. created by the worlds themselves. the legendary weapons.

they aren't mortals that lived a long time and became powerful. they are more than that.