Reviews for A Much Deadlier Tournament |
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![]() ![]() If i want my stories written, i'll do it myself. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story. And I like your take on Su-Li; never seen it before. Please continue and finish soon. |
![]() ![]() Great story. Really hope you'll update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it's less than the site is dying and more that there's this... Pervasive atmosphere of simply not leaving reviews. Even AO3 seems to be having that issue and it was even discussed recently on Reddit. Which is where I got the recommendation for this fic. I like it, by the by. The plot is interesting, the blank slate canon character is a good change from the typical usages - all the Daphne Greengrass ones. A few spelling mistakes here and there, but those are evidence of typing too fast. A good plot line that got me hooked, has kept me reading, and got me to leave a review. And will have me coming back for new chapters over time and recommending this to others when I can. I was recommended this because of a "Harry is sort of subtly terrifying without actually being extremely powerful" thread on Reddit. And you do that ideal justice, imo. Harry isn't absurdly more powerful than canon - he just does scary things. Make freaking chlorine gas? Kill a dragon with said gas? Drop his compass for a bit to actually defend himself? Hell yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just read this for the first time, and I regret not doing so sooner. I hope you find the time to continue it soon. Can't wait to find out what happens next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What there were no reviews. For shame. Good chapter. Though you will find there are multiple uses for rubber ducks depending on the size. Though I highly doubt that duck shot is common. Or around in the 90s. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Idk if the site is dying, but I wasn't too pleased when you startet the rewrite. Usually rewrites end in disaster. You could use an editor for spellchecking btw. I sadly don't have the time, but your most common mistakes are 3 letter words and not completing phrases. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sighs* I hope that it isn't, my friend. Because if FFN is? Then it would be yet another fan site that had failed me over the quarter century that I've been online. I admit that I have about one hundred stories that I have yet to read and review, and the notifications have been hit or miss on many an occasion. :P *ahem* And now: The Review! Excellent chapter as always, my friend. It does leave me curious though. May Petunia sign the emancipation papers so That Harry may be able to live on his own? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, this is for sure a very amusing chapter! I can totally see Petunia awaiting those documents each year and keeping score. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AN: TFTC. I don't think the site is dying. I enjoy it, but I think many people are using AI and just posting trash, causing the site to have a rash of bad stories lately. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. It's an excellent read and I look forward to reading what happens in your next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont know about dying. i think people are just less willing to review. my favs and follows have beem climbing as fast if not faster than usual but reviews are way down |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter greatly enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It doesn't matter if Penelope Clearwater was a Hufflepuff (she wasn't.) Because she graduated the year before the Tri-Wizard Tournament, just like Percy Weasley, who was working for Barty Crouch and Penny was never heard from again. You know, like in the books? |