Reviews for Captivated
Greenlips24 chapter 1 . 2/6
"Her lies .. were a fine tether that should it be broken, would unleash the monstrosity that was the truth which would destroy everything." - this line sums it all up. The push and pull of this, knowing what we do, had real poignancy and make us wish they could have had their happy ending. Well done.
UIa chapter 1 . 2/2
great job
Helensg chapter 1 . 1/31
Such a shame that those last lines were not to happen
Whatfunny chapter 1 . 1/30
very Nice!
pallysd'Artagnan chapter 1 . 1/29
OMGGG love it!
Mountain Cat chapter 1 . 1/29
"That which is marred at birth Time shall not mend,
Nor water out of bitter well make clean;
All evil things returneth at the end,
Or elseway walketh in our blood unseen."

But you almost make me wish she could have had her fairy tale ending.