It will be super messy if Danny does not want to negotiate, and demands Aegon bend the knee. But let us assume Jon would rather not sit on the throne... still a little messy

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Respect the throne.

Honestly you being a canon slave lessened my interest a great amount. I don't understand why you forced the civil war to happen when it could have easily been prevented.

How fucking retarded. He could EASILY solve this by one or two assassinations.

Yes! it's back! Love it, my favorite part was Smoke and Daenerys I hope next chapter they get more focus

OK this is really good

Looks like a cool story but there just way too many mistakes in the first chapter for me to read the whole thing

Hmm this has been interesting to see grow over the years, quite interesting now seeing what's been going on with Sub-Zero's developing influences in the Northern Army and good developments that Robb Stark is going through now heeding more into the thoughts of his Bannermen and doing good in eliminating Walder Frey's influence from the Riverlands, Stevron Frey will prove a new page starting of his House's new direction and a potential interesting figure among Robb's battlefield commanders should Stevron find those opportunities to grow his name, Catelyn Stark will be in for much realizations to what war is truly more like to not influence in it but all better that less power is being put in her hands.

I'm curious to see if you're do new elements for who Robb may potentially marry as Maegary Tyrell is bit overdone a lot, he will be facing eventually of offers coming to his way when further need of securing the Stark Bloodline is pressed and there are few interesting potentials in the Riverlands, there's Janos Bracken's daughters like Bess/Catelyn/Barbara/Jayne/Alysanne, Tylos Blackwood's daughter Bethany Blackwood, Greatjon Umber does have daughters, Marianne Vance given her House will be an supporter to Robb, Alys Karstark if Rickard Karstark makes the offer to him, Dacey Mormont or Lyra Mormont, and Wynafryd Manderly.

The thought is up to you depending on your planning but seeing something new for there would be interesting. Though I can see that the Kings of Winter would've likely had practiced polygamy in some of their reigns or at least had concubines given it would not have out of ordinary with other Kings that did it like the Storm King Ronard the Bastard, Robb wouldn't be type to do that unless he knew there was consent and not being like Robert, Aegon the Unworthy, or Ronard himself about it. It will be certainly be case factor for Jon to eventually encounter about judging from now the Lords that have putted their support for his future reign.

Olenna will be in for some surprises to see of how things will actually turn out for Robb Stark but called it in regards looking over the situation in the Stormlands and Dragonstone, it'll be interesting to see her reaction that Stannis will be declaring for Jon as well, I look forward into seeing more of the influences that are now in him as one thing I'm noticing is give more into more of presented changes in characters that were taught by Sub-Zero like usaging Martial Arts in their fighting styles, mental strengths, and physical capabilities after the type of training Sub-Zero put them through as I can see Stannis would've developed workout routines imbed in his habits and mediations. It will be interesting if either his Durrandon or Targaryen blood will find itself stirring when more magic is returned into Westeros.

I'm surprised there hasn't been more asked from others about who Jon's mother is with him now being held hostage at Riverrun as I can see Hoster will eventually start throwing words on it or it being gossiped around in the Keep, the most popular theory is of course Ashara Dayne and Cersei herself in the books even remarks it to Ned as its already widely known that Ned and Ashara danced together in Harrenhal and Jon's features would've fit it. But otherwise interesting results should emerge as no doubt Brynden Tully is going to play a role in his eventual freedom from captivity.

Smoke being with Daenerys was quite the surprise yet hopefully this will mean all better for her growth, having more figures in her sphere that are willing to give their firm opinion and more outside perspective will do her well to learn more vital keys in ruling and given more reality of what the Targaryen reign was like, it was certainly not 300 years of peace as she claimed it in Season 7 than it had been more filled with madness, conflicts, betrayals, loss knowledge, and the Targaryens being their own worse enemies, she will have look more closely of which of her ancestors that did actually ruled well to see more reflection of how did their efforts become stagnated by their successors. Smoke may too see that she does not grow to enjoy power too much before wisdom. Its going to be interesting of what roles he'll play in and I do hope that eventual visit both Tyrion/Jorah Mormont will do to Valyria will be much more intriguing for they should see what true madness and horrors did the Valyrians unleashed out in awake of the Doom.

All in all I'm looking forward in seeing how you're further develop out this story and what new elements will be introduced. If intrigued, will leave links to videos that may interest you, particularly one that tells of a strong theory that the Starks have White Walker blood in them. Wish ya all best of luck and stay safe out there, until the next time.
PAR KOTE BAL IJAAT BE MAND'ALOR!

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"The Secret of The Stark Bloodline The Legend They Forgot A Song of Ice and Fire"

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"The Best Fights (movies) Mortal Kombat Theme Song !"

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"Mortal Kombat Conquest - Music Video (best viewed in 720p)"

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"Jon Snow / Running Up That Hill"

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"Game of Thrones Robb Stark Sabaton Carolus Rex"

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"Rise of the Young Wolf - War of the Five Kings - Game of Thrones Lore"

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"Why Was Jon Snow And Daenerys Targaryen's Relationship So Weird?"

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"Ashara Dayne (Ned Stark) Hurricane"

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"Bloodraven: The Targaryen Who Caused The Song of Ice and Fire"

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"Roose Bolton: Character Overview & Book Actions Recap"

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"How Elia Martell's Death Changed Oberyn & Created The Sand Snakes"

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"Brandon Stark's Secret Bastards The Wild Wolves"

OK THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY AND A.U.! I love SUB-ZERO'S take on the Game of Throne's world. And his plan to fix the coming disaster. The logical mind of the Lin Kuei Grand Master will be a welcome addition to this chaotic world. And I can't wait to see were it goes!

Very enjoyable read from start to finish I can't wait for more chapters to come and enjoy

That is dope, I wanna next chapter ASAP! :)

I strongly advise that Sub-Zero should use his sword The Kori Blade which will strikes terror in the hearts of his allies and enemies especially the Lannisters.

Glad to see this story continuing, keep up the good work!

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