very very good, the b*tch got what she deserved! YAY! anyways, very good chapter as usual, and I liked how you had the little misunderstanding about the leaving deal, added some more depth to the story. I'll be looking for the next one!

I'm a horribly lazy reader, hence the lateness of this review. But I promised to review all your last chapters to make up for not reviewing the first ones, so here it is. Kudos to another wonderful chapter!

Well this wasn't how I pictured the little daytrip going, but I'm quite satisfied with the results! The elf witch is gone, and even better it was her own foul disposition and animosity towards Valia that got her sacked. Very good! I'm so glad Legolas finally had an excuse to ditch the bimbo. ‘Then perhaps it is best that we do not marry.’ You had me cheering in my seat Lady Silma. It looks like I'm going to get my happy ending after all, and I'm so very glad.

Ahh, and then the scene between Legolas and Valia. Very, very, very well done! It makes complete and perfect sense that Valia should leave for awhile and give the people time to deal with the situation of the Prince's broken betrothal. And of course, they just wouldn't be Legolas and Valia if things went easy between them! The whole thing was so poignant...I really felt for Legolas when he thought Valia was leaving him again. And finally, the explanation of why he allowed himself to be bond to the elfwitch. Oh and loved the bit about Valia using her right from the duel. I was wondering when that would show up again.

Well, this is not as thorough a review as this spectacular chapter deserved, but school has drained my creativity and there's half a million other things I should be doing at the moment. But I'm ever so looking foward to the last three chapters, especially now that a happy ending seems to be on the horizon. Speaking of them, isn't it time to post again soon?

I loved this chapter!

hey, its me again. Im so happy witch lady is gone. I woz away for the weekend. i came back on sunday and ran through the door and sed is valia updated and my sis woz like it woz posted like 2 mins after i left home. i woz so happy when i read it. the next chapter should be cummin out soon i hope keep up ur ace work hope that valia and legolas have a splendid time together and do marry and have kids (coz they r soo sweet and i love kids lol) hope 2 r and r soon cya bye

~*~*~*Lothwen*~*~*~

(dancing around the room) YAY! Hadrielia's gone! YESYESYESYES! Hurray! (stops) hehehe, sorry, got excited! They're finally together! YIPEE! (starts dancing again). Dance with us Lady Silma, Legolas and some others are here too! Care to join the party?

YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE REALLY REALLY SOON!I'LL DIE IF ANOTHER CHAPTER'S NOT POSTED WITHIN A WEEK!

it feels like the end but like i kno u would never leave me with this ending hahah! GUESS WHAT!

ITS MY BIRTHDAY TODAY! YAY!

anywayz when i saw that hadrielia was there i was like no, no i'm not reading this rite...wait what the hell?i think i was feelin more pissed then valia! but then i was like hahahahahah when she feel off and legolas went to valia...b4 i read that he did i wa slike thinking he better go to valia and ditch hadrielia! then he did i screamed YES! then he like sent her to the curb i was screaming the bitch is gone the bitch is gone! but yea i loved the chapter...the bedroom scene with them was so sweet but i was like gonna cry when legolas flipped out at her! i was afraid he was gonna be like i never wanna talk to u again go away bitch but then he wasn't so i was happy! haha sry i have had a bit to much cake so i'm kinda sugar high! tata

~~Enelya~~

ha ha ha, Hadrielia! die, die, die!

but that was so sudden...very sudden...too sudden...

YAY! NO MORE HADRIELLA! WOOHO! oh that was such a happy chappy! haha. i loved it muchly! update asap!

-Jyness

oh this chapter is so sweet! i'm so glad the witch is gone!

This is my favourite chapter. Hadriela is finally gone from the picture.(she won't come back will she? Please say no). Legolas and Valia are finally together. It was a very sweet and romantic chapter.

You seem to be updating faster with great chapters!

. YOUR GREAT! Roses flowers etc! ALL FOR YOU!

that was a great chapter, and i loved your past chappie's as well! is there any more to the story? plz, dun let that be the end! i stayed up the other night to read that! keep it up!

D yah!

that's all that really needs to be said really

although I'll add that this is great and I love it D

more please

Am )

Yay! "Cel-ebrate good times, c'mon!" Finally! I've been waiting for that to happen since the end of Shadow! I'm so excited! This has been a good day. I read two of your absolutly awesome chapters! This entire story, and especially this last chapter, has been goose! (Check my bio for explination)