Reviews for The Heart's True Home |
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Wandering Prophet chapter 11 . 8/31/2003 Wow. This was a great chapter. Hmm...what else is there to say? Oh, what was Valia dressed as? I think I missed that part. Because I wasn't sure what Elowen was talking about when she said, "You two nearly match." Yeah, well, thats all I have to say. Good luck with the next chapter! |
lauren chapter 11 . 8/30/2003 wow...that was an amazing chapter...i've followed this story since the beginning...and i'm obviously extremely lazy cause i haven't reviewed heh...but your an awesome writer...i can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope that they end up together and it's looking more and more like they will :D update soon! |
Zeriae chapter 11 . 8/30/2003 omg! these last 2 chaps are gorgeous! you write so beautifully! i just love this whole ittle series!absolutely wonderful! i never have anything bad to say about it. i just posted something of my own. maybe you could read it and tell me what you think. i really need some feedback. i'd really appreciate it! plz update soon! ) |
zarsky chapter 8 . 8/30/2003 Update soon! Love it. |
Janessea chapter 11 . 8/29/2003 OMYGOD! update update update! tehehehehehe. somethings going to happen eh? yes! aw how sweet of glorfindel! thats so cute! :D tehehe mischevious scheming parents. thank you elowen and thranduil! lol. hurry hurry i cant wait to read the next chapter! -Jyness |
Winter's Roar chapter 11 . 8/29/2003 OH NO! HOW COULD YOU JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THAT? NO! MUST…FIND…OUT…WHAT…HAPPENS! okay, that was fantastic! SO much going on! I love that glorfindel got a gift for cithien! WOO HOO! Do i sense a marriage coming soon in this story! haha I'm glad she was talked into wearing the necklace. Thank you so much for all the details you put into this chapter. Everything from facial expressions to the gowns to the decorations, it really made the chapter interesting and fun to read, demanded my attention. Ah, legolas and valia match! HA THat's too funny! Can't wait t find out what "special" thing happens that night. Frankly i don't see a problem, she loves legolas, legolas loves her, his parents approve of them getting together, all equals no problems! haha Anyways, marvelous job with this chapter, it's up there on my fav list out of this story so far, although the waterfall one still takes the cake, haha. Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon pls! ~ winter |
Musicgrl chapter 9 . 8/29/2003 These chapters get better and better! Loved it. Sorry I am a bit behind on my fic reading, LOL I've been to busy to read. Anyways, I'll try to read the next two chapters tomorrow. Great work! Musicgrl |
honeybeareyes chapter 11 . 8/29/2003 aw... i can just imagine how pretty valia looks like. i can't wait until legolas notuces her pin. please post the next chapters! thankies! i love your work! |
MyNameIsNotSky chapter 11 . 8/29/2003 I must say this again: Legolas's parents (even if only one of them shows up in this chapter a lot) ROCK! |
cutemara chapter 11 . 8/29/2003 Oh! I can't wait to find out what happens next! BTW I think that the Vanyar had golden hair! |
Lilena chapter 11 . 8/29/2003 ARG! Please please..you said you have the last chapter ready..put them ALL up I hate surspense! |
Brittany chapter 11 . 8/28/2003 I haven't gotten a chance to review in a long time but I have to say the story is awesome. It's coming along great and usually by this point in the story I know what is going to happen in the end but i'm actually not sure with this story. I do hope they get together, i'm a sucker for happy endings. |
Le Usako chapter 11 . 8/28/2003 PROLIFIC! Wow, do you like know ALL the words that I seem to use a lot. That's starting to get a bit freaky. Anyway... May I say that you absolutely out did yourself with all those BEAUTIFUL descriptions and details. I was beside myself with satisfaction with the way that you 'dressed' all your characters. And oh man, I am very anxious to see Legolas's reaction to Valia's costume and the wonderful presence of the Hair pin. This can only get better. Also, that little bit of Valia speaking with Glorfindel was precious. I was always mad at the movie for not giving Glorfindel his due credit...I mean, this is GLORFINDEL we're talking about here! He defeats a BALROG and what does he get? Arwen stealing his part... No offense to Elrond's posterity. But yes, I just love that he's in your story. I believe I told you this though, when he first appeared in Shadow of the Past...if not, well now you know that I was extremely pleased. You know, the way you described the ballroom, it makes me want to go to a dance ...or to a prom ...or ...SOMETHING! Of course ...it would never be that spiffy. *sigh* ah well! I liked that bit about Cithen and the necklace. Another precious moment. And of course...Legolas and Valia match ...MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH I hope Helala what's her face sticks out like a sore thumb...of an orc (no offense to orcs)...or something nasty... Oh and let me tell you I'm looking forward to the evil one's reaction to the hair pin as well, as she was efver so keen on making Legolas give it to her... (I'm enjoying that thought a bit too much) YES! And Valia finally puts two and two together! YAY! But how will she react from now on? DuN DUN DUN! oh I simply cannot wait until the next chapter. And let me say I 100% support The Power of the Book and Davan on whatever they may do to the "Elf-witch". I'll be in the back waving flags and doing cheers for the two of them. Happy writings...er postings my friend. Good luck to Davan the ever so wonderful beta. Great job to both of you. Cheers! |
Iluvien chapter 11 . 8/28/2003 Ack! I can't take it! I need to know what's gonna happen! Sorry that I can't write more, but, as always, I loved it! I also loved the last chapter even though I never got around to reviewing it. I really really really wanted Legolas to kiss her! Of course, I suppose he really should break it off with Hidrielia before anything else happens, but I was still a little disapointed when Legolas's parents interrupted them at the waterfall. _~ ~Iluvien~ |
Bambbles chapter 11 . 8/28/2003 YAY! Whoohoo! ::applause:: Wonderously stupendous chappie! Here comes the ball :) Something wonderful is going to happen :) I am very happy hyper right now! Couldn't stop thinking about Legolas and Valia all day during school... Why? Well my one friend whom I got hooked on this story checked it yesterday (when my net was down) and tells me you've updated... I almost cried that I didnt get to read it yesterday. And so all day I sat there in anticipation... and now I read it and its wonderful yet again! I absolutly can't wait for the next update... soon hopefully? Happy Writing! o and I LOVE the cast page! Marvelous darling, simply mavelous! :) |