Reviews for The Heart's True Home
Zyzychyn chapter 3 . 5/29/2003
Darn, darn, darn. I was hoping Legolas was engaged to Valia and she would be the last one to know about it... wouldn't that be interesting? Tricking her into going there... not being told who the bride is... only that she's from Valinor... then finally realizing that they're trying to engage *her*... Oh well! Your story is great anyway!
joanna chapter 3 . 5/29/2003
Your story is very good and I was wondering if you could email me when you update yourt story.

Thank you
Musicgrl chapter 3 . 5/29/2003
Just to let ya know I am still alive hehe. I haven't been reviewing your story, basically cuz all I have to say is it good and needs no improvement. (Which is the truth) So I'm waiting for at least 2 or 3 chapters before I review lol.

I love the story so far, except for that Hadriella or whatever her name is hehehe. I knew it would be her. Well I had more to say but it's been a while since I read this, er... as usual great chapter keep it coming!
Iluvien chapter 3 . 5/28/2003
How can you do this to me! Ack... I just want to shake that girl. I new that this story would have to start out rocky when I read the summary "...400 years later..." I can't believe she just sat around for a hundred years with that weight around her neck, and that he didn't try at least one more time before the hundred years were up.

She must really be petrified and emotionally damaged. In fact, that's the only excuse that will keep me from jumping through this computer screen and locking her and Legolas in a room until they work things out!

I felt so frustrated with her when she ran away ... again... but I guess that's a sign of good writing - i actually care about her.

Please, oh please let everything work out alright!

And thanks for the long chpaters! )

~Ilúvien~
Jing-chan chapter 3 . 5/28/2003
Oh gosh! Glorfindel actually kissed her!

It's kind of suspenseful...I'm so glad that I actually searched for the this sequel...

Great job!
A. Nutter chapter 3 . 5/25/2003
Hey Silmarien, sorry i've been away so long, only just found this one again.

Wow. Good so far, please keep going!

Add me to your update list please! .

Keep going, i'll be waiting for your next chapters!
Odile chapter 3 . 5/24/2003
Wonderful story, I greatly look forward to updates in the future and would be extremely appreciative if you would inform me when you do so via email.
Karone Evertree chapter 3 . 5/24/2003
wow that was really good! how do you write so much, i'm amazed. i never was good at writing, but i love to read. so i can't wait for your next chapter.
green flip-flops chapter 3 . 5/23/2003
It's not fair! How do you update so fast and make them super long too? The readers of my stories are ready to kill me right now :D I have't updated some for MONTHS.

Well, that was a great story, and I really want to read more soon. But how could Legolas be betrothed to Hadriela? *shudders* Did he really convince himself that he loves her?
Narcissus724 chapter 3 . 5/23/2003
Oh what an entrance! I certainly did not expect him to show up like that :) Thank you for the surprise. This was a great chapter- I'm certain readers will enjoy all the complications that popped up unexpectedly. Not that the title of it gave anything away ;) I had a sneaking suspicion that there was more going on behind the scenes of Legolas's engagement and was glad to have that suspicion confirmed. I knew Legolas might have moved on but I didn't go so far as to think him cruel and heartless enough to get back at Valia that way. I absolutely love this story. Can't wait until you update!
Dora chapter 3 . 5/22/2003
I really liked this chapter and its intensity especially at the very end. I'm wondering though whether Glorfindel knew that Legolas was in the room? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Britt chapter 3 . 5/21/2003
Oh man, oh man. This whole thing is so great. I've just only discovered this and the story before this and they now my favorite stories. You have such a talent for...emotions and character development. I'm almost obsessed with this story. I check at least 3 times a day to see if you updated. Its pathetic. And I keep reading chapters over and over again. I love all of them. I especially love the ones after Legolas finds out he loves her and hes just so cute and...real. The feelings in this story are so real. The only thing I don't understand is how Legolas let her go after the wedding- he just suddenly turned physco on her. Maybe he was just frustrated at her for avoiding him even after she said she loved him. Maybe you can explain that to me, since I can only make assumptions. But, oh man, I do really love this. Its my favorite story I have ever read, I hope you don't mind if I add it to my favorite stories list. And I would really appreciate to join the mailing list so I can stop compulsivly checking the site for updates. Thanks! Update as soon as possible!
Rachel chapter 3 . 5/21/2003
oh dear, this is so sad. Its like a totally twisted version of romeo and juliet. I mean in the sense they are meant to be together but things keep getting in the way. It was really good though. I liked it lots. A lthough i wish it wasn't so sad, i always try playing happy music when im reading these new sad chapters. Hope its not too very long for the next.
poppy11 chapter 3 . 5/20/2003
I love this story! You are such a great writer! Please continue, and update often! :)
Galorin chapter 3 . 5/19/2003
Wow, AWESOME chapter, so many surprises. When Glorfindel kissed Valia, my jaw dropped right to the floor! I liked the whole scene in Silia's baby's nursery. The struggle in Valia between joy for her friend and sadness for her own broken dreams was very touching. And, in both this story and the Shadows of the Past, the prickly relationship between Valia and Isondil is one of my favorites. Isondil is so loyal to Legolas that he comes in conflict with Valia, yet it is clear he considers her his friend as well. The scene where Valia first senses she is not alone in her room was so cool, your description was so good it put ME on edge, I almost started hearing shadowy figures around me! The only problem I saw was some of your sentences were long, they seemed to go in too many directions at once and may have been easier to understand if they had been split into two sentences. But, otherwise, this chapter is wonderful and I cannot wait to find out where Valia runs off to. Thanks!
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