Reviews for The Heart's True Home |
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Aidenfire chapter 1 . 4/27/2003 That was good but. . .Valia said it had been 4 centuries! Legolas, in his letter, had said he would wait for 1! Did she not accept him? How could she not? And why does she want to fall in love w/ Glorfindel? I believe you already know my feelings concerning that couple! (I don't like them together so very much!) She's going to end up with Legolas, right? RIGHT? ? ? |
Legolas' Lover chapter 1 . 4/27/2003 GOD DAMNIT! thats was too good ! yea, i don't think there is anyway ur writing could improve!~ so yea! ah! i sohuldn't be reading this! i have a exam in like 20 min.! curse u and legolas (heheh) oh yea! screw him cause he was mean to valia! ok! i really really really gotta go! AH! tata ~~Enelya~~ p.s.~ i was surprised to find this! i thought u would have emailed me that u had posted it! ggr i think u know my email by now but still. mayb u forgot it and thats why u didn;t send anything! AH! sry i'm in a really bad mod! l8er |
DSH chapter 1 . 4/27/2003 It was so nice to get updated on what is happening with Valia and Legolas. But really, this is going to turn out happy isn't it? I can't wait to see who Legolas is engaged to! Keep up the great writing and thanks for e-mailing me about the update. |
Janessea chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 silma dear i must admit. that chapter was kind of confusing...i'm a lil lost here. and angst? ANGST? silmarien... is this going to be a sad story? no! plese don't torture me again! i want a happy romance! but other than those things i really can't complain about anything! you're writing is so good! it's all descriptive and beautiful and i LOVE it as usual! so despite the fact that i'm confused and sad, i'm so very glad you're back! update! -Jyness |
Wandering Prophet chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 Wow. That is all I can say. You really put your writing talent to work on this chapter. I hope (well, I know) that the next chapters are just as good. This was very well writen. Congrats. |
Marauder by Midnight chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 A great prologue! I hope Legolas really isn't engaged... Try to update as soon as you can! ~Lara~ |
The Story Weaver chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 No. Damn if i was her and he was so close to me. I probably would have kissed him. |
agaxris chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 that was terrible... i mean... what happeened... i do hope it gets better... please don't stop... it can't be THAT BAD... God... this story is making me cry... |
UndomielEvenstar chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 Great writing, the story sounds promising. Can't wait for the next chapter to be up. |
sasa chapter 1 . 4/26/2003 heyhey sorry i din quite get it so she was recalling her last ancounter with legolas which was 400 yrs ago right? and legolas is now bethroted...not married? so who's the new pair? still L/V? |
sanshi chapter 1 . 4/25/2003 YOUR BACK! This chapter was sososososo amazing! Same people in such interesting situations. This story is lookin' REAL REAL GOOD! Take your time and make another great chapter! Sanshi P.S. can I be added to the mailing list? BYE! |
Fangelir chapter 1 . 4/25/2003 Wow, that was an amazing chapter! Great beginning so far. And I like the title too. I don't see how much higher the quality can get, but you always manage to surprise us. It was interesting how the formal farewell at Silia's wedding was so much like the formal farewell Valia gave Legolas after she slapped him. I want to find out Legolas's fiancee, darn it! I'm wondering if it's Hadrielia. That would be sad though, and rather sickening for Valia. I hope for the minimum wait before the next chapter, but if a couple weeks mean a long and detailed chapter, I'll be glad to suffer. D |
Narcissus724 chapter 1 . 4/25/2003 Yay! I was so looking forward to reading this! You've created quite an interesting situation for Legolas & Valia :) Can't wait to see how they are going to work themselves out of it and get together. Like Istawen, I have a sneaking suspicion as to who Legolas is engaged to, but I just can't say it. Valia is definitely still in character- 400 years! Wow! She's definitely as stubborn and hard-headed as ever. This first chapter was rather heart-wrenching, especially the interaction between Valia & Legolas at Silia and Isondil's wedding. Kinda strikes a nerve with any reader who's been broken up with or been the one doing the breaking up. The other person seems like a stranger all of a sudden, and this really came through in that scene. I felt bad for Legolas. :( Keep up the good work- you are an AWESOME writer. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
YingRui Too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/25/2003 The sequel came fast! :) But omg, 400 years after they departed? Dang...that is long! I'm glad Legolas makes Valia nervous, lol. But who's his betrothed? Hm... |
Iluvlegolas chapter 1 . 4/25/2003 *sob* legolas is engaged? but he loves valia! (wail) |