Reviews for The Heart's True Home
Eliwen Lothiriel chapter 16 . 10/14/2003
GREAT! i love it! its finished yay!

i'm glad the witch didn't do anything horrid to get revenge on valia.

*Eliwen*
sandra chapter 16 . 10/13/2003
hello lady silma! i just wanted to review because i saw that cast page of the hearts true home! *breathless* ! it was so nice! valia is so pretty and all the other characters suit their personality! Congrats!_
Iluvlegolas chapter 16 . 10/12/2003
I can't believe it's over...what are you going to write about now? You're one of the best writers on that I've seen, planning anything new?
Aidenfire chapter 16 . 10/10/2003
Again, this was totally brillant and spiffy and swell and a thousand other words! A wonderful ending to a wonderful story! Oh, and I enjoyed the little story by Davan also... D
Alina11 chapter 16 . 10/9/2003
i loved this story so much, i'll be keeping an eye on all your future work
SilverWinter chapter 16 . 10/8/2003
I really liked that chapter. YAY! They finally have an elfling. I knew all along that she would have a child but I did have my doubts. Sorry my review is so late it was because I was getting my computer fixed since around the end of last week.

YAY! The elf witch is being hunted!MUWHAHAHAHAHA!
Zeriae chapter 16 . 10/8/2003
OMG! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU! SHE GOT TO HAVE A KID! YEAH! HAIL THE AUTHORESS OF ALL TIME! IT WAS PERFECT! I HAVE LAUGHED AND CRIED THE ENTIRE WAY THROUGH; SMILED AND FROWNED. IT WAS GORGEOUS! I LOVE IT! I CAN'T BELIEVE IT IS OVER THOUGH! YOU MUST WRITE SOMETHING ELSE! I CRAVE YOUR WRITING! IT'S JUST SO GREAT! I LOVE YOU! ) THANKS FOR THE STORY I WILL NEVER FORGET. FOR REAL!
Rachel chapter 16 . 10/8/2003
aww, that was lovely! I can't stop smiling, lol. That was a great surprise, I thought the last chapter was the final one. I wondered why you didnt relpy to my last review but i thought you just have been really busy but it was stupid ffnet, typical. But who cares about that, im so pleased!

After you saying that it would be either be a happy ending or a depressing one i was beginning to think it would be sad, but it wasn't! I like happy endings so much.

I don't suppose you'll be writing a sequel to this as well, will you? I suppose not. But i hope you carry on writing anyway. I'l definately contnue to read them if you do.

Its doesn't seem that long ago since i started reading this but its been ages. It'l seems strange not reading about her anymore but at least you ended it on a truimphent note.

You wrote that chapter really beautifully, it wasn't overly slushy either which is a definate good thing.I never though i'd be sayings this but i actually feel sorry for haderila! Poor thing being chased through the woods by mad then she does deserve it.

And thankyou for carrying on writing such a epic story its kept me gripped all the way through. Goodluck!

~~Rachel~~
lauren chapter 16 . 10/7/2003
that was simply the best story ever! i loved it! great job in wiriting... if you start another story please let me know, your an amazing writer and i'd love to read more!
Galorin chapter 16 . 10/7/2003
I feel rather sheepish for thinking that the Epilogue part two was the last chapter, I should have known you still had some more brilliance to share with us! This ending, the real ending, was very beautiful. The little boy is PERFECT, as I've said before I love kids. And I also loved the image of Valia being helped in the library by the little ones, it was absolutely ADORABLE. My favorite line is "My arms ache to hold our child. He will grow to be beautiful like his father. A strong elf both in wisdom and in skills." I'm not even sure why, just a very sweet thing for her to say. I also like when Elen comes to his parents room at night and is sitting on Legolas's chest, that is a cute part. Well, these two stories have been quite a ride! Thank you for sharing them. Your writing is wonderful, you have an incredible talent. Oh, and the hunt at the end...great idea, good to see Hadrielia will be getting hers! Seeya!
Fangelir chapter 16 . 10/7/2003
*applauds* Your story hasn't done anything but get better and better since I last reviewed. D

The detail your descriptions contain and your way of conveying emotions to the reader is absolutely amazing. I've probably said this many times before, but I love your style of writing. The love you show between the two is extremely touching. And I liked the reference to the book at the last chapter.

And Hadrielia! Ah. . . I loved her little stomp of fury. . . kudos to your beta for the last bit at the end. I can just see them making a movie out of your story, and the Hadrielia ending showing after they play all the credits. (Your cast page is quite cool, BTW).

Excellent job. Great ending to a great story.
Brittany chapter 16 . 10/6/2003
oh my gosh I so fell in love wiht this story. You should really look into writing as a career if you havn't already done so (or already are doing so) I hope to read some other stories by you because this one just kicked ass.
TigerLily713 chapter 16 . 10/6/2003
Great ending! Tastefully done, and well paced. I've enjoyed your story much and wish you a comfortable respite. I look forward to any other fics you may convince yourself to embark upon...

Lily
DaveRocks chapter 16 . 10/6/2003
Yay! As sad as I am that this wonderful story has come to an end...I loved the end.

I'm so excited that Legolas and Valia had an elfling, though I sort of expected that to happen. It would have been to sad if it had not!

Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I cannot wait until you share another!
littlesaiyangirl chapter 16 . 10/6/2003
Wonderful! Beautiful! Masterful! Incredible!

Awesome job! Thank you so much for putting this fic out into the world! It's authors like you that I strive to be like (in a writing aspect). Looking forward to seeing more work from you in the future. _

(she-who-must-not-be-named) LOL!
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